where is my 10 bucks i gussed it was videl and i'll send u a tape for it

Great story. Can't wait to read Battle Stain and its sequal.

hahaha that was funny lemme gues it was the kid metioned in one of the prior chapters wehn gohan first started to got o school hahahahaha this is funny love it
xoxo anger angel

I love These Stories! You must continue this line of Writing!

so your saying sharpner is going to take over how many years to learn?

when am i getting the silent bob poster

now your in the hole for 100

dirty dancing is popular because you can take any male/female pairing,have them dance,and sing 'time of my life'.like in the movie

so now it's ten bucks?jeez,your sending yourself to the poor house

Once again, I love your stories. Please, you're too good at humor to stop writing this series. If you really won't continue, can you at least find another talented author to take over? Or, if someone has already picked up your story, could you tell me where to find them?

Awesome,pwnsome,uber pwnsome super awesome story.Would say more but my dictionary of coolness malfunctioned.
Are you making a sequel?

Actually peeing his bead when he was 10 makes sense. If I knew that the world might get blown up by a madman in less then a week I might ** my self too.

Loved that house of mirrors thing.

What did they do? Tie him with Duct Tape. Erasa waas actually smart anough not to be in the group at the time.

That is a wierd shrink. OH ya that one crazy kid. After about half way done reading I wandered if he would be mentioned.

At least he didn't come up with the stupid name or the Ginyu poses. Plus they are already going out so Videl knowing isn't a big deal.

Plus he did all that time actually needing to go pee, so his excuss would stick.