Love it!

I've read several of your stories now and you're a really amazing writer! This was really sweet at the end.

Wow! That was great! Yiu captured Rosalie'smpain perfectly, and Emmett was in character the entire time. Nicely written and keep it up!

I love it! So sweet.
Thank you for writing this.

LOVE itt

i'm sorry but try to use this as constructive critisim... that was just really cheesey... i'm sorry.

I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was very well down with a lot of insight to both characters.

Thank you!

This story reminds me so much of “Shameless”. The part where Rosalie keeps disputing about whether telling Emmett or not would drive him away from her. It’s clear that the two are fully aware of their own feelings for each other, and like always, poor Edward is always caught in between, despite how much he doesn’t want to…poor guy. I can’t blame him for interfering though…although it isn’t exactly “interfering”- Edward just wants the best for both of them and to inform Rose that her worrying is for naught, even though it’s understandable.

This is a classic right here.

*sighs in content* That was just so sweet and heartfelt. And I like your take on the whole plotline. It was nice and shattered a few cliches, not to mention placatingly romantic.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work. This was absolutely lovely. I loved it! Very well done, and oh so very very sweet. Wonderful!

Sincerely,

FlamingRedFox

It's really nice to see another side of Rosalie, great work!

that was so beautiful. fabulous job. i was wondering if i could add it to my c2 of rose and emmett fics?

Yay, they got engaged! That's awesome. I love it. His proposal was so sweet and just right. And I love how Emmett realized that Rosalie and he could be happy.

This was a really good story. I absolutely loved it.

Oh my gosh, that was so unbelievably sweet. I loved having Emmett's POV. The way that Edward approaced Emmett and then the way it finally came out was just right.

I loved Emmett's immediate response about wanting to kill them.

The conversation between Rosalie and Emmett at the end was so sweet and it showed so much with the two of them.

Great job.

So far I love this. I love Rosalie's thoughts, they really fit in with how I think she had to have felt with Emmett finding out about her.

Edward coming and talking to Rosalie, their interaction is really well done.

You did a great job with it. I can't wait to read the next part.

OMC Nikki!

Wow...I LOVE this. I haven't read any FF like this. It was BEAUTIFULLY written. I think I even had tears in my eyes at the end :) . You are a GREAT writer. Great can't even cover it.

This was like...like...WOW.

Vi