oh, that was so very sweet! loved the shiyori interaction, coz they were so in character! looking forward to more shiyori! XD

I enjoyed this. Very nicely written. :)

I love how the two can share even the quietest moments together, enjoying each other's company, and still remain -IN- character the whole time. Though maybe you could check up on the Italic words. Because the format kinda got messed up.

Still, lovely setting. ShinHiyo is awesome. Please do keep writing!

Oddly I didn't find this fiction OOC at all, because I also think they are like that when they're alone.
Even if the fight constantly, I always thought their relationship had a hidden tender vibe.
They can understand each other the best and that is the strenght that keeps them going foward.
You portraied this perfectly.
Great job!

cute story

Now, I am in my own little world, dreaming of Shinji and Hiyori - together <D Ah, I like it so much!

love it!

Very well-written indeed. I liked the relationship portrayed by these two, cute and very well-matched.

That was quite good, I enjoyed that! *clapping* I think they are like that when they are alone too, when no one can see them!

Awesome story!
I really like the odd relationship
that exists between Hiyori and Shinji!
You captured it perfectly!

I love this fic... there's a whole deep relationship between the two of them, and you've captured it and justified it brilliantly. Love for the Vaizard! :D

~MN

Well done.