Oddly I didn't find this fiction OOC at all, because I also think they are like that when they're alone.
Even if the fight constantly, I always thought their relationship had a hidden tender vibe.
They can understand each other the best and that is the strenght that keeps them going foward.
You portraied this perfectly.
Great job!

cute story

Now, I am in my own little world, dreaming of Shinji and Hiyori - together <D Ah, I like it so much!

love it!

Very well-written indeed. I liked the relationship portrayed by these two, cute and very well-matched.

That was quite good, I enjoyed that! *clapping* I think they are like that when they are alone too, when no one can see them!

Awesome story!
I really like the odd relationship
that exists between Hiyori and Shinji!
You captured it perfectly!

I love this fic... there's a whole deep relationship between the two of them, and you've captured it and justified it brilliantly. Love for the Vaizard! :D

~MN

Well done.