- I really liked this story! It was funny how the whole situation was narrated through conversations between Lily and her Mind. Very nice idea and very original!

Ha,ha. I love the "my mind is plotting against me" theme. Great job!

Hey Rose! I really liked chapter 2, It was so fun! Because I know what it feels to be in James' position. I know how ODD that sounds, but I really do. Maybe I will tell you someday ;D!

Anyways, nice story! And, please, keep writing!

For you, Sum English Muffins whit a James-like guy who has marmalade on his lips,

-Lunatikk!-

this was cute

Good, humorous mind of Lily's

Cute .

Very funny and entertaining!

aww! that was soo cute!

i'm gona miss this story! :(

It was defo a good one! :)

x

good end to a good story

It's... DONE?

Le sigh.

Well. That was rather depressing. The fact that it's done. Not the chapter. I liked it :D The whole thing actually. It was fantastic! (WEIRD! As I typed fantastic, Randy/Jonathan Taylor Thomas on Home Improvement said it at the same time!)

Favorite line: “It’s a long story, all right? Maybe someday, when we’re married, I’ll tell-”

Brilliant.

I'd say update soon... but... yeah

Ashley

aw its over and omg love the when were married slip

i like the end it's really good and i like your other fic about the battle of the langaues (and yes i no i spelled it wrong)

lol. I lurved this story!

i like it but it's kinda confusing when lilly is "talking" 2 her mind

another great chapter