There's something really sad and happy about this story that I really liked... Made me teary eyed, I love Kaoru and Hikaru, especially their chapters in the series- sobbed like a maniac. :D Great work on writing about their mental note on the relationship between them as brothers and their friends. ^^

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I loved it. Like loveloveloveloveloved it.

I love how you've tried to get into their whole idea of them being one entity and not two separate persons. Especially when you chuck a bit of Twincest in there. So very very good.

My only criticism is that in the series it's Kaoru who's actually the one who pushes for the twins to be separate people rather than being defined as 'us'. Hikaru is the one who's unwilling to let go of the concept that they can't forever be defined as one entity.

It's a minor point in the face of your awesomeness, though ^^

~Panda

I love this a little too much.

I understand the twins' lonely situation. I understand why Hikaru would become mature. I understand, and yet.. you're kind of right. o.o It makes little sense.

But. I still like how it's written. Especially how the twins finally figure out that they've been lonely- oh wait. o.o Okay. I officially love this now. -adds to favorites- I like it how Hikaru's the one who wants the Host Club back just so he could show Kaoru he loves him. That's just sweet. I hadn't noticed the first time around, but it's just... cute. :D

Thanks for writing this; it makes my heart all fluttery that Hikaru was the one who finally pushed Kaoru out of their "lonely" world. :3 An "original" confession. xD

Wow! I loved it! You should make another if you aren't already! :D

And the whole "Hikaru and Kaoru" close relationship at the end made me almost cry. It kinda reminds me of my best friend and I. Good work! *two thumbs up*

Nicely written.