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shaneka landell
2008-08-17
ch 8, anon.
abuseAw. That was the sweetest fanfic I have ever read. Thank you for such a wonderful story. You have a unique imagination. Cant wait to read the stories you'll produce in the future. Don't stop writing. I'm now officially a fan of your work.
TheCritic18
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseIm really not admiring your formatting right now... kind of sucks.. NO- it does suck. Im sure this is a interesting story but, I just had to scroll down to the bottom of the page to give you this review becaue the formatting is dreadful and makes your story hard to get interested in.. Dont write dialouge in the paragraph.. Dont write in long clumbersome paragraphs
Graelyn-chan
2008-05-27
ch 9,
abuseOhh! Shameless exploitation of artists! I'll try to do some drawings. They might not be up for awhile, since I'm taking a crazy summer class and my scanner broke...again, but enjoy yourself by visiting my deviantart page full of TP goodness. Ah, the shameless plug!

http://graelyn-chan.
Burp
2008-05-23
ch 9, anon.
abuseI draw stuff. Got a few things up at deviantart, but I haven't attended them for a while. I might be persuaded, in exchange for a Goten/Bra, if you're so inclined, or a Gohan/Videl, or yet another Trunks/Pan. I'm a sucker for romance.
Lady Constantine
2008-05-23
ch 9,
abuseXD hahahaha Shameless indeed.
I'll try and do something chibeh art on the ol' computer.
ladybugg
2008-04-07
ch 8,
abuseCheers. I loved it. I loved the part about the lemon part. The privacy part was a hoot. Great story. I'm so glad that Trunks finally got the girl in the end. So what's your next story gonna be about? Hm? You didn't think that I was gonna let you finish up this story and not bug ya about the next one right? So get to typing. You have a legion of T/P fans seriously waiting for some more fanfics. Great story. Keep up the awesome work. Laters
listenserendipity
2008-04-03
ch 8,
abuseAw, I can't believe it's over :(
I do hope you write again - would love to read more of your stuff!

Also - Vegeta and brownies. Perfection. Hahaha.
Lady Constantine
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abuseYAY! Gohan didn't loose as poorly as I thought! XD Nice epilogue. I wish to read more works from you soon! (Maybe a sequel)
Lady Constantine
2008-04-01
ch 7,
abuseX.X Kya! Vegeta and Trunks...ftw. Wow. I loved Trunks's and Veggie's attitude in this. Piccolo was good too! I'm so sad that Gohan lost (he was unconscious...T.T)
Purple Prancer
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abuseI think it was fantastic exactly as it was!! I like the Vegeta comment about the brownies, he's a big soft touch underneath it all. I hoped it would be a little longer but all the same I really enjoyed this, it was brilliant. I sincerley hope to see more work from you in the future! x Well done!
lovesanime92
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abuseThat was a greaT STORY! I can't believe that it's over htough T.T Plz make another story, aor even a squal to the story! I don't care, just make another TXP story! I love this story! and I want you to make another one plz!.
XShakeItAtTheDiscoX
2008-03-31
ch 8,
abusewow
this is going my favorites
the last two chapters cracked me up.
i laughed soo hard when vegeta punches him and tells him to get a room :]

simply amazing.
:]
lovesanime92
2008-03-31
ch 7,
abuseYay! finally you update plz update really soon! i love this story! Plz don't make me wait any longer! I love it! Plz update really soon!
listenserendipity
2008-03-23
ch 6,
abuseBrilliant! Loved the interaction between Vegeta and Pan. Can't wait for your next update.
Lady Constantine
2008-03-23
ch 6,
abuseVegeta is God! He's so funny XD. 0.0 HOLD ON A MINUTE! TRUNKS IS GOING TO FIGHT GOHAN? D: I don't recall Mr. Briefs sparring with Vegeta! You must continue this soon!
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