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| Rose1948 2008-08-14 ch 6,  | abuseAs Duncan Fisher might say, your story is full of 'Mechs, big guns, and a whole lot more. Very enjoyable read. |
| XRaiderV1 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abusewow, what a story, and, something tells me Asuka wont have such an easy time getting Shinji, something tells me Rei will probably fight Asuka tooth and nail. keep it coming. |
| slimjim27 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abusethak you for the update man!! please update soon!! |
| Neferius 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseI'm not going to claim it was short but I will say that you ended it at a very bad time. Why? Because it was just about to get really good. Oh well. I figured Touji would become a Mechwarrior sooner or later...just not this soon. Everything is looking good so far. I can't wait till Asuka strikes. Read ya Later. |
| Neferius 2008-07-10 ch 5, | abuseThere were some good battle scenes in this one. I'm not disappointed that the 5th angel mech was blown up and the 4th captured but I would have like to see them fight. Then again, the 4th being captured could be used against it's makers...could it? Next! |
| Neferius 2008-07-10 ch 4, | abuseI almost felt sorry for his Hollander, then again I knew it was coming. Still it was a worse way to go then what the Chimera went through in my opinion. Next Chapter. |
| Neferius 2008-07-10 ch 3, | abuseThe boy's now a Steiner...what was he thinking? Next chapter... |
| slimjim27 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abusethanks for the great update man!! |
| Neferius 2008-04-06 ch 2, | abuseUnit 01 looks goofy. Well not really, but at first I pictured the original with all that 'crap' on it and I actually chuckled a bit. After I re-imagined Unit 01, it turned out okay. I can't really be disappointed by the third clan angel battle because thats just the way it needed to be. That's why I'm really looking forward to Shinji's next opponent. Read ya Later. |
| Rusty Knights Productions 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseAh, good to see more. This story is one of my favourites. Along with Quote the Raven, of course :P Waiting for more, keep it up. -Knight 2 |
| Rose1948 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseWoo Hoo! BattleMechs and LOTS of fire power! |
| TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseGood start. gunny |
| RahXephon 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI don't see any improvement in the amount of dots missing at the end of a dialogue sentence. |
| Rose1948 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I have MW4 Vengeance, Black Knight, Mercenaries, and both 'Mech packs. Unfortunately, I can't figure out how to use the packs in campaigns. Using them in the instant battles gets kind of boring and I don't do internet multi-player at all. ::chuckles:: Looking forward to more! |
| Rusty Knights Productions 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseGood to see you're around. New version of the fic then. Pretty nice. Makes me want to reinstall MW4 Mercs and mechpacks. Waiting for more. Keep it up. -Knight 2 |