| Reviews for Retribution |
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gatewatcher 4/27/08 . chapter 10Poor Cassie, thinking Allan is a lost cause... He is a scoundral, but he is also good. Don't let her give up yet! Lana |
gatewatcher 4/25/08 . chapter 9Yay! congrats on the dissertation. Series 1...Great way to celebrate! Poor Much! I can only imagine his birdcall. Nice chapter. Lana |
WishfulTrance 4/25/08 . chapter 9*whines* ohh! a sequel? i can't wait! i want to know i want to know i want to know! you're stories are great! please hurry up and get Djaq to come back! i hate this mystery! But it's extremely well-written, so i might forgive you! great chapter, please update soon! And i like your OC, Cassie. She sounds cool. CF xx |
teawithsilk 4/23/08 . chapter 8Oh this was really good! I know I'm a bit late here but I loved this story. Angsty Robin is the best Robin, I say and I thought Cassie was a great OC. Protective Allan was awesome too |
gatewatcher 4/20/08 . chapter 8He was soo sweet with her. ( However, not stealthy...funny! ) Hope your dissertation goes well. Update when you can. Lana |
WishfulTrance 4/19/08 . chapter 8Will Djaq come back? i want both to come back! please! PLEASE! great chapter, review soon. CF xx |
gatewatcher 4/13/08 . chapter 7She joined the gang! Yea! |
gatewatcher 3/26/08 . chapter 6What a cool day! Thanks for the update. Send more soon! Lana |
Soapy-Liedown 3/25/08 . chapter 5Poor Cassie! But it was so sweet with her and Allan! Update soon! |
gatewatcher 3/22/08 . chapter 5So glad Allan showed up to stop her! He was very gallant protecting her. Enjoy your holiday and come back and write soon! |
gatewatcher 3/20/08 . chapter 4I just found your story. I am enjoying it very much! Poor Robin. I am glad Cassie has talked some sense into him. I'm equally glad that it appears Allan will be her interest. Update soon. |
Soapy-Liedown 3/20/08 . chapter 4Great story! I love it! The charaters were so well capturedin the first chapter. I really hope Allan and Cassie get together! I also hope that Will and Djaq come back from the Holy Land, any chance? Soapy |
ell 3/16/08 . chapter 3 well, i love this charater very much. the dad makes alot of sense. he lost everything so he turned to beer. anyway, keep it up i love it. but do me a favour, please dont make robin too sad for too long, i know hes just lost his wife hey i dont wanna be too depressed lol! keep it up, im loving all of it! from ell ps( please make this a allan/cassie story) they dont have enough allan stories! lol |
ell 3/14/08 . chapter 2 OMG I LOVE THIS! the charaters are very good, i love cassie! keep it up, write more please! ell |
weldolet 3/13/08 . chapter 1Hi - good opener. I like Allan and I like how you have written him. The new character should be interesting. Your descriptive narrative is excellent! Looking forward to the next part. |