THAT'S IT?!?!?!?! PLEASE MAKE MORE, AND MORE OFTEN! IT'S BEEN A YEAR AND YOU'VE ONLY MADE 5 STORIES! BY THE TIME YOU MAKE ANOTHER ONE, I'LL HAVE TO RE-READ THE ENTIRE STORY JUST TO KNOW WHAT THE HELL'S GOING ON IN THE STORY! NO OFFENCE, BUT MAKE MORE!PLE
ASE!
PRETY,PLEASE!
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MAKE

MORE~!I enjoyed making this review, =P, but, seriously, make more

Dang... love this story's different story plot! Though when will that mysterious teenager appear?

W.O.W!
I love it!
Its totally awesome the way u don't pull puches in ur storytelling! Keep it up!
xoxo

good job!

aw, michael is too cute and lucian looked like jesus! hahahahah - ive never really noticed that before, but know I think about it - he kinda does, he's just too pale for a middle-eastern person.

Please update soon, I LOVE this story, its wonderfully written and the plot is brilliant too!

Now michael knows What Kraven is doing to selene. And he is **. I wonder what Lucien makes of all of this? Kraven better look out I think michael might just kill him if her gets the chance. I hope Selene gets a chance to kick his ** first though. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
~ALANNA~

Immense Chapter!
Ooh Michael and Kraven fighting for one prize, who will get it?
Update soon, I must know what happens!
CYDx.

Again, you have created another awesome chapter. I love the little conversation between Michael and Lucian, you really brought out the similarities of the two with their love for female vampires. And Michael's rage...he's getting a little possessive of Selene as well but overly so like Kraven is.

Which reminds me...I better finish up chater two in "Ace in the Hole"...

Repeating myself, great chapter and keep up the excellent work! Godspeed!

So Michael is looking for Selene and Lucian sees the two as some sort of repeat of himself and Sonja? Earlier chapters have suggested that Lucian is already a hybrid, so I wonder how many others he has already converted. With last chapter's quibbling over the treaty terms, I'm forced to wonder if either Kraven or Lucian ever intended to abide by the treaty.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

daccu65

Your back! I like the talk between Lucian and Michael very much in common between them.

I also like Michael's inner lycan coming out although his eyes coul have turned lycan blue and sprouted fangs, that would have made it cool.

So when is he going to transform? :D

=) nice chapter. I liked it. Although I should probably reread from chapter one since I've forgotten some bits and pieces.

have you seen the new underworld movie? I haven't yet and I was wondering if it was any good, haha.

So how have you been doing?

Oh great chapter ^.^
What's gonna happen with Lucian?
Please Update soon
CYDx.

I thought what the hell review this one as well.

Ah well, hmm...Poor Mikey, I hope Lucian helps him through the transition better, he is Michael's sire if you would call it that.

I think with practice a second generation lycan will change at will. A peace treaty with the lycans, hm...has it been signed yet! Will Michael be among Lucian's entourage?!

Great chapter!

That Kraven! I hope he gets what's coming to him. This story is coming along nicely.

Good one, poor Michael.

Will Lucian teach Michael to change at will?