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| Zarz 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuseWow! This was an incredible story. Yes, that's definitely something Jesus would do! I love how patiently he deals with Pilate, but it is also kind of nice to see how shaken up Pilate got after sentencing Jesus to death. Jesus' last words about interceding with his Father are really sweet. Great story! |
| yamihoole 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseWow, I enjoyed that a lot! I'd like to think that's the attitude Jesus would have towards Pilate. I really like the way they were characterized, you really made it seem believeable that that could have happened |
| Celeste 2008-05-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow, that was really good! It was so deep and I love the way you characterized both of them. It totally seems like something like that could have happened. Nice job! (can I ask though, which movie were you basing this off of? the 1973 one or the 20 one?. It seemed like the 1973 one to me...) |
| elfchicks 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseWow. I have no other words. Just "wow." You are an amazing writer and this is a fabulous story. Don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise. |
| ThatGuyBehindTheCounter 2008-03-14 ch 2, | abusekudos, me likey. starts creepy and ends sweet. the creepy is my favorite. |
| xAdoraVeritasx 2008-03-11 ch 2, | abuseMy God. Thank you. That is all I am capable of saying. Thank you so, so much. |