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| FirstDraft 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseHahaha! Very good - laughed out loud at the end. On tiny quibble: “Only Marmite. Why, don’t you like it?” Gene Pulled a face in reply, “It’s a love-hate thing I suppose.” She said with a smile. Should read: “Only Marmite. Why, don’t you like it?” Gene Pulled a face in reply. “It’s a love-hate thing I suppose,” she said with a smile. |
| nonsenseandmischief 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI wondered what this would be, being so short, but it really did make me chuckle! :D |
| caromac 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseSweet. I like. |
| Twilight Highlight 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseLOL, that's fab. :D |
| scjon 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I laughed out loud at the end! |