Aw, it's so cute.

Happy Writing

ooh! Sweet, romantic, but not too sappy/cliche... me liked!

This is very cute! It's not in chronological order, is it?

I loved the way this story was written..it not being in chronological order added to it, somehow. You captured their personalities perfectly..great story!

Cute.

I liked how you set it up with all the little sub-sections. The timeline was a little confusing at first, but after I got used to it and kind of understood the jumping around bit it wasn't as bad. I simply adored the ending.

--Cady

i love this it is very beautiful but the non-chronological order was slightly confusing :D

Aww, this was cute and very interesting.

I liked this. It had some very interesting elements in it that I liked. I might just have to steal them for my english projects. I like how you started with them to being strangers, to them knowing eachother, to them not knowing eachother again but with foreshadowing of what had already been explained. It was very good and the switching perspectives was good. Also how you labeled all 50 steps different things. Very unique. I really liked and enjoyed this.

aw, these were really sweet!

Fantastic story, I loved the themes. I've always wanted to know more about Gary and Cythera.

Great writing. I loved it, especially how Gareth the I is called 'Gnat' and just the wonderfulness that is Gary/Cythera. Though didn't they actually have 3 girls then a one boy born around RotG? Anyway, great drabbles.

That was beautiful, funny, sweet, and just... just... wonderful! It's the best thing I've read in a while. I LOVED IT! I haven't smiled so much because of a story in forever! GREAT JOB!

I think this is a masterpiece! I'm adding it to my community and favorites! GREAT JOB!

Lady Mage

I’m completely in love, and it didn’t even take the whole fifty. Romantic, sweet, and as always, hilarious – despite the jumps in the timeline. Except – except …doggy massacre!

This was wonderful. I adored all of it and the part about the life-size chocolate cocker spaniel was hilarious.