I liked it. Awesome job. (:

Oh, lovely, lovely, lovely. :)

That was lovely and very Jack-like. Great work.

Labyriths, you channel my beloved!! You so have his voice and so have his heart to share with us. Jack's ways...assured that he is utterly blameless, that it's all her doing. You have such an agile mind what produces these little bits to be made into lovely stories. I have been reading away from here becos I didn't want to wear out the shiny on the stories I enjoy from you. Now, there's new ones! in which to revel--Thanks so for the hard work. It is, as always, a pleasure head, heart, and skin hearing the beloveds from you.

Aw... Very sweet, fluffy letter, I loved it.

Aww...very, very sad and sweet!!

Oh this was so wonderful!!

I really loved that adorable bitterness Jack has for Elizabeth that you can completely see through to the love he harbors for her.

'But I'm not sure if, even with the star, I can find my way without you.'

Absolutely wonderful. Fabulous work, deary.

Gea

Great Job!! I really liked it! Go Sparrabeth!

I would say "Aw!" but I'm not sure that's entirely appropriate at this point. xD

Before I lose it, this was one of my favorite lines in the story: "I could have drowned you, of course, but I'm sure the sea would spit you out." xD I'm sure it would. Lizzie is a hard chick to stomach.

Anyway, I must say, I'm enormously impressed. Very, very well-written tale; I like the AU-ness of it all, and the tone, as well as the last sentence, which kinda just brought the whole thing together. I love making Lizzie the criminal too, and Jack's way of defending himself was rather amusing. The way you wrote him was wonderful; I could see Johnny Depp yelling this at a pouting Keira Knightley in my head right now, and it's making me laugh so hard I can barely breathe. xD Brilliant, brilliant stuff.

Keep writing PotC! This is a great piece of work.

Cheers and a bottle of rum,
Zay

AW! You're absolutely amazing. I almost cried...so sweet! FAVORITE IT QUICK!!

Hey! I absolutely loved it! Especially the bottom sentence that read:"But I'm not sure if, even with the star, I can find my way without you." Very, very romantic! You've captured Jack's character down to a tee! I love this one shot and I'm a big fan of your writing! Keep up the fantastic work!

Woaw, that was so beautiful and Jack-like. I really loved it. :3

Ice

So cleverly done. Loved it!!

"I kept my hands to myself and off you. Perhaps, there was that one time ..."

LOL!

The whole thing is very very Jack -- and very Elizabeth, too. And I think he would skirt around that question with talk of stars.

Great work!

~ Geek Mama ~

That was amazing! It's so hard to imagine Jack writing a letter, or rather it's hard to write a letter that would be really HIS. And this letter was TOTALLY his, it was FLAWLESS, and perfect, and wonderfully written.

And the ending was brilliant, very sweet & VERY Jack.

Beautiful oneshot. I LOVED it:]

Hmm, that was sweet, cruel, and funny...I like it! I'm guessing you came up with some before algabra before you wrote this? Ah well, I'm addin it to my favorite stories list! HA! I agree, (if this was what you were getting at,) I think Elizabeth actually came onto Jack more than Jack did her!

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