 BearMistress 2009-11-01 . chapter 6Nice |
 maricota 2009-03-23 . chapter 6is this the end of this story? |
 ms.shyblush 2009-03-22 . chapter 6i cant wait for the ending ! PLEASE ! finish it !! please please please please !! and the lemon between Jacob and Bella kinda grossed me out... lol.. not ur writin its just that when i picture them... ughh... it creeps me oUT... it kinda disturbing... love you story and writin BTW =) |
 lstrobino 2009-03-17 . chapter 1Love, love, love this story! I think you've really nailed the desperation they all feel. Please finish it. Pretty please... |
 congee 2009-02-05 . chapter 1This fic is so damn hot that I have to fan myself!!
Oh, PLEASE let Jake/Bella be end game!! Edward is nothing special, he's a cold fish! But JAKE - now, THAT is a man! Woo! |
 yankeerose 2009-02-03 . chapter 4Bella you lucky **! |
 yankeerose 2009-02-03 . chapter 1Thats one smokin hot werewolf! |
 WittchWay 2009-02-01 . chapter 6Excellent story. Looking forward to more |
 twilight1515 2009-01-16 . chapter 1I love this |
 Amythest Corthe 2008-12-15 . chapter 6HOLY hell, this is awesome. Poor, dear Bella. She wants to stay loyal to lovely Edward but she needs Jacob too, for his heated passion. I love how the Edward scenes are so hard and cold and the Jacob ones are just full of fire. It's delicious, this story. I can't believe that you'd just leave your readers hanging like this! Please update as soon as you possibly can; Bella's fainting was just perfect there and I ned to know what happens next! |
 bookworm8721 2008-11-03 . chapter 6o, girl. keep it coming. that was awesome |
 blueandblack 2008-11-02 . chapter 6This is amazing. Your Jacob/Bella breaks my heart in the best and most delicious way possible. Guh.
Not sure if this is the end or not, but I'm adding it to alerts just in case :) |
 chelsea-chee 2008-11-02 . chapter 6...Hopefully that's not the end... is it? I've at least got to know what happened to Bella & the others! Anyway, loved this chapter. Full of twists & turns & the feeling's so real, that I can feel the pain Bella's in, of having to choose between her two VERY different loves. Update with this wonderful story when you can please! Thanxs! :) :p ;) |
 Jazz Dazzles Me 2008-11-01 . chapter 6Holy ** **!
Excuse the language but man, I did NOT see any of this chapter coming!
In the beginning, I thought Jacob had like, raped her and they were taking her to Edward and then once I figured out that that wasn't the case, I at least thought that Edward was going to be upset and sad and hurt but I didn't expect him to be **!
I mean, he has every right to be but it was still unexpected.
Ok so you TOTALLY have to hurry and pump out the next chapter, no pun intended!
PMASAP! |
 ihearttwilightmorethanu 2008-11-01 . chapter 6She slept with him AGAIN?!?! What a loser! She deserves to lose them both! GR!
I think you captures all of their personalities really well..that is just how they would have acted
Please update soon! |