Please tell me there's more? I understand almost 5 years is a long break, but if there's any news on your stories I'd love to hear it :)

Wow, just wow. I just spent the last 5 hours reading this whole story and wow. It's amazing I'm gripped and torn and oh the emotions! I loved the quiet acceptance you portray prowl with and even though I see you've not updated in some time I will hold out hope that you'll return to this fic some day and complete it. I would love to see Prowl be that confident mech again with his love by his side and his best friend by the other. So much love for this fic. If you never write for it again I wanted to tell you this was beautiful and thanks it's rare a story grabs me like this. 3

So Sad. But so good.

I hope there is another chapter soon, seeing prowl get better with sunnies help will be great after all the hardships they have been through

angled his head in a manner that allows him to look at Jazz from just under the edge of his helm. Jazz had to admit, the look was rather intimidating.

I would love to see a picture of this it just sounds so cool

Wonderful story you are telling by the way

:)

Whats next, whats next?

I adore the characterization. Prowl is something else entirely. From kind to calm to dark and insecure, this Prowl that you have created brings out a whole new side of Sunstreaker not many authors have ventured into. I have not read a Sunstreaker x Prowl fic before, but believe me when I say that I'm glad I found this fic.

Oh this story is beautiful, just beautiful. I never thought this pairing could work bu it does.

Keep it up!

Holy craaaaaaap! I found this story through an illustration someone did of Nightstalker with youngling Sunny, and dude its had me hooked to reading it all daaaay!

I was in tears by chapter four dangit X3

Its so slagging GOOD, pleaspleasplease tell me you still have the motivation to do more? I need closuuuure D:

sidjvbdkjfvb i love your emotional exploration and character development, and your plotting and writing style is just so satisfying to read *makes note to raid the rest of your stories*

Death

I so expect it's Tracks. I think he wants Sunny for himself.

Amazing pairings and characterizations. Great pace, so very moving. I just wish it would continue. It is so painful as a reader to get to this point in a story and realize that there is a good chance it will end here.

I'm rec-ing this at the Livejournal community improv_logic which is for pairings involving Jazz & Prowl with other characters.

4:30 AM! I started reading this today, er- yesterday and couldn't stop! This is great oh please tell me you will continue this! I HAVE to know what will happen. How Sunstreaker will find out about Prowl's past, how they'll go about fixing this. How Prowl will get back his position and how he's going to fix his friendship with Jazz! Honestly when Prowl told Jazz they were no longer friends I felt a tearing in my heart! It was powerful and so sad! Please continue! Please, please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!

Oh, hawt! I love your story, it was totally unexpected when i stumbled across it and i love it to bits! XD poor prowl, he always seems to get the short end of the stick. :( *thats okay, he has sunny now. :D* please update soon!

I honestly wasn't too sure about this pairing when I first started reading the story. Seeing as I've binged on the past 24 chapters in about two days or so, I've been convinced. Well done! I particularly like the fact that you take your time with your characters; Prowl and Sunstreaker falling for each other actually felt believable.

This, of course, makes Prowl's trauma even more wrenching. I normally don't enjoy angst for angst's sake, but you've managed to remind me why this genre of storytelling is popular - well written, it's quite powerful. I look forward to more of your work!