This is the funniest and randomest fanfiction I have ever read! it's really cracky I give it 4/5!

Man, Gary sure is mean huh? good thing Lance is there to comfort poor Ash ^_^.

A little on the short side, definitely a lot shorter than most of your other stories. Even so I think that the voice and description as well as the plot itself was rather realistic, honestly more capable of happening than the countless stories of moonlight kisses that I usually see on the site. Lots of description definitely necessary for a story like this as well as blunt in places where it is needed. Overall very rich and offbeat story!

Irvin Z. Martinez

-shrugs-
I don't like the way they portray Gary in the anime, (I do prefer Green), but he's so much better than Ash. AND, he has an Umbreon. Which makes him god, in my opinion. Yeah, wev. Ahem, great story, instant favorite, Gary-hate or otherwise!