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| Lana Atkins 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so.. pretty-ful :)And your descriptive writing's fantabulous. I would have liked to see more done with the story though. It would have also been nice if you'd told us HOW the conch shell got there in the first place :) Make up something random. Ranma is pretty random after all. Anyhoo, your waff is pretty good! :) so good, in fact, that I am going to go off and read your other fics now. Toodles! :) |
| PearlBlue5 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I love their interactions! It' so lovely and cute!! |
| TendoAkane92 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it! It was so waffy and I can actually imagine this being on the show, but just a but more romantic!! So cute! :D |
| salad 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww! that's adorable! :) thumbs-up~ |
| Naoko Asakura 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful piece of writing... Hope to see more work from you! |
| Rose1948 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I like! |
| MattSaotome 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseTicklingly pleasing, and a good feeling all 'round. Very well done! |
| MZephyr 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. A bit short though. |
| Soumyee 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseHi there! It's a wonderful and charming story... I like the way you've preserved their characters and presented it so sweetly... Really good!! |
| Habana 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Good writing. |
| jdcocoagirl 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusethis is so worderful love how this story works for a romance... more soon please it would be nice if you made a sequel of this... great job. |