Nice, very sweet :) I like your writing style, though the end was slightly expected :P ^^

Cute... just not that romantic...

It's so.. pretty-ful :)And your descriptive writing's fantabulous. I would have liked to see more done with the story though.

It would have also been nice if you'd told us HOW the conch shell got there in the first place :) Make up something random. Ranma is pretty random after all.

Anyhoo, your waff is pretty good! :) so good, in fact, that I am going to go off and read your other fics now. Toodles! :)

Beautifully written. I love their interactions! It' so lovely and cute!!

I really liked it! It was so waffy and I can actually imagine this being on the show, but just a but more romantic!! So cute! :D

aww! that's adorable! :) thumbs-up~

Beautiful piece of writing... Hope to see more work from you!

Very nice! I like!

Ticklingly pleasing, and a good feeling all 'round. Very well done!

Very nicely done. A bit short though.

Hi there! It's a wonderful and charming story... I like the way you've preserved their characters and presented it so sweetly... Really good!!

Very cute. Good writing.

this is so worderful love how this story works for a romance... more soon please it would be nice if you made a sequel of this... great job.