I can reread this story all I want, and it still affects me in the same way it did when I read it for the first time. You have a way with words... I love the way you write and I love the in character-ness. Your dialogue is excelent, but the narrative is also incredibly amusing!

You are amazing. Not only is this the first SetoxJounouchi fic I've EVER read all the way through, I actually LIKED it. Major points for you.

lol This one was interesting...
Even if it was just dialogue, it was funny. Nice.

This is the best fanfiction for the couple that I've ever read. It's original, sarcastic, full of wit. And the dialogue! Gosh, I want to marry the dialogue. The characters are both IC as they can be in this kind of situation. There's maturity to them - it feels that the time has passed - but they're still the same characters we once knew. The description is very alluring, also, and from a fangirl's point of view, Jou must be looking pretty fine himself *A* It's a very refreshening read. It's superbly done and well worked: it's a pleasure to read, you don't have to make any effort since the sentences are well structured and so on. Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Loved the dialogue in this, and I very much enjoyed these versions of an older and more experienced Kaiba and Jou.

This story was very interesting. I liked the way you wrote it and all the dialogue were very interesting and gave a new dept to both characters. The ending was great. Congratulations.

This story was very hilarious. I just couldn't stop reading it from the first word to the last. You kept both Jou and Kaiba so well in character!

Excellent job.

Cute little story, well written and thankfully IC for once, these two characters are easily the worst for being OOC in fanfiction. I laughed at Mokuba's "adventures" too.

Great job.

Well, that was different.

But I liked it. ^.^

Nice work. ^.^

I really, REALLY liked this. Very cute, and well written. (A good combo if ever there was one.) Nicely done.

Okay, so I found this surprisingly enjoyable. The summary had me fearing the worse considering the awful Jou prostitute fics out there. This had me laughing however, right out loud and into my best friend's ear. Just the first half had me wondering how long Jounouchi'd worn that jacket and not known-- or how many times he'd been propositioned and not understood why. XD

The second half seemed just right. Just enough emotion to get the point across but not so much that Jou and Kaiba were sobbing all over each other. I can't quite put my finger on what was so perfect, but the ending just felt... comfortable. I liked it. :3

All in all, excellent job!

Each and every line in this story is freakin' hilarious. Too much wit. D:

Oh, I like this! *Great* dialogue!

^0^ I LOVE IT!

So funny! I love that it's a future fic, mentions of Mokuba, and how Jou was happy about being a cook, despite his less than wealthy circumstances. Fabulous fic. :D