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| wlrjb 2008-09-05 ch 1,  | abusegood I really liked it. Makes perfect sense and fits in to the way the rest of the book was written. I loved it. |
| Veghindu101 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, excellent, EXCELLENT missing scene. Seriously. I love the attention to detail from the books. I love how you managed to show that Ron HAS grown, because frankly for a boy of 17, he had to grow up pretty fast. Side note, did you ever wonder what ended up happening to those fangs? I mean, Ron and Hermione didn't need them once they were out of the Chamber... so where did they go? Did the RoR keep them for future use? Hm. |
| ChocoCherry 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseomg,that was brilliant,just brilliant!! there are so many chamber of secrets stories out there but this one is by far my favourite now!! |
| MrsGrint105 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! But i absolutely loved the last sentence! Beautiful! |
| Rosalie Weasley. 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseanother amazing story! keep writing!! |
| a-victorian-writing-desk 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant work. Now, towards the end I caught one little typo: the pipe the(that) would Other than that, I really enjoyed this one. I could feel the tension between Ron and Hermione. You could really tell they love each other but Ron is too afraid to let his feelings all the way out. I found this very enjoyable. They felt very canon to me. Going into the chamber felt like a glimpse of the past. I liked that part. You wrote it all very well. What a pleasure to read. Keep them coming. Take care, ~A.V.W.D |
| Worldmaker 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseVery cool. Very cool indeed. |
| Ella Bridi 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYou're probably getting sick of my reviews, but you're just gonna have to get used to it, because I love your stories and I can't read a really good fic without reviewing it! lol I believe this is the tenth time I read a "destroying the cup" missing moment, but this is, by far, my favorite one! I like the way you describe things, the way your dialogues go, and I'm always impressed by your vocabulary. And the ending is always perfect! |