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| hansolo18 2008-05-30 ch 3,  | abuseI am really enjoying your story. It is extreamly well thought out and very entertaining. Keep up the good work! |
| Eternity of Night 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseThis is good. Addicting, even... update fast. Like, fast-fast. |
| NamelessHeretic 2008-05-14 ch 8, | abuseHow delightfully twisted... |
| zarien 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abusegreat chapter |
| Spriggs 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusei still believe its ryan who is the main baddy and if its Fountaine then thats a strech |
| KareFactor 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseWoah, he's dead - quick too. I guess Jason was just another splicer. And that girl, where'd she go? At least the fight between Jason was short, not too long that it'll drag on and on. That's a good thing :D Looking forward to next chapter. |
| NamelessHeretic 2008-04-29 ch 7, | abuseo_O That was quick... Now, who's the REAL bad guy? |
| clilc 2008-04-29 ch 6, | abuseJust found this story and I think it's Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| KareFactor 2008-04-23 ch 6, | abuseThis is going well.. I'd like to see where this is going.. Jason's contact might be someone.. who we think is dead..but really isn't.. |
| Spriggs 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseat first i thought Andrew Ryan was incharge. i know it sounds crazy but the bathyspere would have revived him. wait i just thought , what if jasons contact is Ryan. but any way great story keep it up |
| zarien 2008-04-16 ch 6, | abusegreat story plz continue |
| Kyouger 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseNice chapter. You obvioulsy know a lot about Rapture's geography, and I commend you for that. There's only one or two spelling mistakes, which I can easily forgive. I am curious about how Jason managed to get his hands on Incinerate and Electo Bolt 4 in the short amount of time that he was running from Melissa and company. Anyway, update soon. |
| Master1795 2008-04-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseOnce again your writing skill is evident. But I can't help but notice hopw short these chapters are compared to your Halo trilogy (which I love btw). And how Desmond said chap about twice. Because I'm English I find that a bit stereotypical (look it up if you must lol) and it irritates me. As if I don't get enough of it on xbox live... |
| NamelessHeretic 2008-04-10 ch 6, | abuseHis contact must be an ex-splicer who got too greedy, methinks. |
| NamelessHeretic 2008-04-02 ch 5, | abuseInteresting... very interesting... I was wondering what happened to all the other Little Sister, since only a few apparently come with Jack in the good ending. |