gosh. it's very hard to find good Squall/Riona stories. this was awesome!

The whole time, I was like, "OMG, SOMEONE'S GOING TO DIE!"; you kept the tension and the foreshadowing all thoroughout the story...I liked how you portrayed Squall/Rinoa relationship wise... ^_^ very sweet on that end.

Anyway, awesome stuff. I totally fav'd you.

So I held off reading this until I was done with my own challengefic, but now that it's done I figured I would.

Yes, this is exactly what was missing from a lot of Squall/Rinoa fics that I've seen. THIS IS EXACTLY IT. I am so glad you don't waste words. All the flavor and half the calories--YES THIS IS GOOD LIKE THAT.

So much love.

~Cendri

Great story! Will there be more? Interesting premise, and very well-written, as always. My part is about Rinoa doing laundry, and her worries that her clothes were washed with someone's bloody uniform...Very, very eloquent. Good job!

Please tell me you're going to add more to this! This story was really awesome, I loved it!

so many things unsaid... but still, it's not important, you say enough for us to understand. All that silence fits the tension and it makes the story very well balanced. It's brilliant, there's a form of sadness running throughout the lines and yet, it is all so calm. Bravo.

Brilliant as ever. It's a treat to see well-written Squall/Rinoa, and you always deliver.

You do tension so well, and I love how the repetition blends it all together. I also like the short, simple paragraphs during the attack, and the swan imagery.

Wah that was so good. All the slightly awkward tension and yet not-awkward moments and the bits where they can't discuss work and wah so good. I love what you do with them, love love love!!