Oh. The last line is beautiful. You convey John's panic, fear and anguish very well.

This was a pretty interesting premise, with John and Ronon switching places in the story. I really liked how Sheppard was trying hard to contain his concern despite himself. The end was rather abrupt, but overall a nice fic. :)

ooh, nice

Ohh this was GREAT! I loved that John was there with Teyla! :D

You should do a sequel! Please?

I so loved this! :D:D

verry cool. love it