Reviews for Brown Eyed Girl

Lexie-H 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseI love the song, and I love what you've done with this story. Ron's voice is very strong, and seeing Hermione through his eyes is a fantastic experience. I do want to point out your punctuation of dialogue, which needs a little work - it should go last word, period, quotation mark ("Like this.") instead of last word, quotation mark, period ("like this",) Regardless, beautiful story. Especially love the paragraph about him proposing on a Wednesday. It's lovely he remembers and savours the little details =) Lexie
HermioneWeasleyFan 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOMG I LOVE IT!! I really ahve nothing else to say..I did notice some typos but I shouldn't be talking! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!
Rosalie Weasley. 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abusethat was so amazing! i loved it and you wrote the characters very well! brilliant story!!
mustardgirl1128 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseAww! Fluffity fluffington (Thanks to Morning. xx for those 2 words...check her out)! I love it! It was SO sweet! And the song fit very well! So cute! Good job!
Garima 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseJenny you really do write beautifully. this was just perfect. it really was.
Elledreamer 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseOh yay I love Ron/Hermione! This was so perfect. I loved the bit - My beautiful, clever girl. My fiancée. My Hermione. Really touching. I thought you got Ron just right too :p it just felt like it was him! Really well done. Speak to you soon, Elle xx