 ChampagneWishes 2009-08-03 . chapter 7So I just found this fic and was really sad when it ended and I saw that it hadn't been updated in over a year. But, if your muse ever finds you, I'll be reading! |
 charlie-becks 2009-03-28 . chapter 7poor ryan, please help him, an dont giv up on this story pretty pleaase, i love it an i really wanna know what happens next, so pleaase update soon! |
 elfgirl83 2009-03-26 . chapter 7wow! hell of a story! i really hope your going to finish, ive read lots of stories in differnent variations where ryan goes to live with the cohens, but yours is by far the most intresting. could you please please please consider finishing this story? |
 chiclete 2008-11-12 . chapter 6Please please please write more soon? I miss this story so much... |
 Pressby 2008-09-24 . chapter 7 update this great fic
though the cursing was a bit much |
 reader 2008-08-19 . chapter 7 please please please update! i just found your story and i love it! |
 Mockingbyrd 2008-08-04 . chapter 7interesting idea. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
 chiclete 2008-07-29 . chapter 7Sandy, yes!! Nice twist, this story is very promising! :) |
 jensenobsessed 2008-07-24 . chapter 7 Omg! This is so beautiful and so sad. I love it, please update soon |
 Ansy Pansy aka Panz 2008-07-21 . chapter 6poor Ryan
I really like your ideas and you execute them v well |
 Ansy Pansy aka Panz 2008-07-21 . chapter 7what? A cliffhanger! NO!! I not like.
I like this story too much for it
Argh.
It's such an interesting different take
I can't wait for an update
It's clever |
 DejaVu86 2008-04-16 . chapter 5Awesome!
Please, please, please update soon :) |
 helen 2008-04-03 . chapter 5 i dont come over to this neck of the woods much anymore as most new fic is pretty blah,but this story is just fantastic,well written and in charecter. i am now so tense! cant wait for the next chapter. |
 Yarrie 2008-04-01 . chapter 5I just noticed this story and I've got to say... WOW!! I'm so curious what's going to happen!! Update soon! |
 the doctor's next dance 2008-03-28 . chapter 5I wish Trey was nicer. :(
I don't know how you manage to do it, but you keep putting in little bits of humour in this dark story, so every now and then you stumble across this little gold thread that's hilarious. Eg. "He stood up and waved at Trey through the window, trying to get him to stop beeping the horn. He could hear the baby crying, cranky from being woken up from her nap."
Keep going, girl, this is really good :) |