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| Valadan 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh, sad, heartbreaking in fact. Definitely worked better when you didn't know what was coming, and more emotional for that, I think. And it could have ended up this way so very easily... |
| Bundibird 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuse*Slaps self* I read this a while ago, and i DIDNT REVIEW IT?? I am ashamed at myself. I loved it!! It was so incredibly sad, and i could imagine it all perfectly and i just wanted to grieve with peter. Great job. Love bundi |
| BertieBottsBeans 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, Edmund! How terribly sad. But you wrote it so well. And I particularly liked how you wove the concept of fate into the story. |
| Siriusly Loopy 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseNO! |
| Katako-Chan 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! Sad, and heartbreaking, but great job nonetheless! I love how Edmund and Peter's speech is semi-eloquent, fit for kings, but not to the point where it becomes a pain in the neck to read it. Great job! Katako-Chan |
| floppyearsthebunny 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseNO! This is great, but sad. Oh, so sad. Is there more? and do you mean "It was suppose to end so." or it wasn't? |
| prpleconverse17 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusemy stomach dropped whne edmund died! but i'm still in love with this tale. glad you didn't warn me cause i don't think it would have had the effect. |
| the1hobbit 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseAgreed with KCS. Injury yes, expected I took those hints. The rest... It's seems I'm as blind as Peter when it comes to that certain aspect. Once my heart settles, this will most defintly be faved. |
| KCS 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseUgh. Pardon me while I try to calm my stomach! Yeah, it would have been nice to know ahead of time, but I suppose you are right in that it would have detracted from the impact. Curse you, anyhow - this was so well done and vividly gripping I can't be mad! Nice job - but WARN ME NEXT TIME! :) JK - well done indeed. |