Amazing story! I love how the intensity grew slowly. For a minute you had me thinking Luke was gone. But then when Mara came back, I Jrs Luke wasn't gone! Amazing story!

LOL! I loved the way you ended this. There was such a feeling of love and friendship in the air. Hilarious, yet somber at times, light and dark. Loved it! Jelp

I really liked this story! Great job! : D

Well I read holonet part of your storie. It had nice idea, but I didnt like all that leet speak. Ofcourse its usual for chat rooms, but still I dont think that it was truly necessary for this story.

LOL! Good! It all started with a chatroom...amazing.

Thats so cool! I like that alot!

That was so good. I have neer been hooked on a a story. that bwas so so funny! I loved the part when Han and anakin were betting! LOL!

Doode Luke got an attuide! But I still loved it. Padmes worads were so deep. I loved it. keep writing.

I loved the part were mara was just spiting out insults. I should use those. I you will let me on one of my stories. anyway this has been one of the best stoys i have read on fan fic. keep the humor. I love it.

LOL. That was great. LukeMara 4EVA!

YE...Anakin..Padme..and Mara and Luke... the way it should be...

Nicely written, but I must say that it seems like the story is two seperate stories. The holonet part seems to have absoultely nothing to do with the Luke going to the Dark Side part... I think two stories would have been easier to keep track of.

tht was so kwl! the tension was so thik i swear i cud of poked it in the face!lol i think u cud of carried on the ending a bit mor tho as i jst kinda stopped, like.." luke went over to the dark side, darth v then decided tht he didn't want to b a evil bastad n quit. luke copied n then got married the end." it was mint tho!:D

Luke Skywalker has a stronger will then that. im sorry but this was just too farfetched! i cannot beleive Luke would turn to the dark side just because vader promised he would shut up about it after succesfully resisting the attempts made by both vader and palpatine! *shakes head*

*Grins* Stang that was great!