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| Fox Dark 2008-07-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseAwesome story, great plot and twist ^_^ *feels all warm and fuzzy* Nyu! Fox-chan |
| CarrionRaven 2008-06-18 ch 5,  | abuseI really liked this story. :D It was amazingly awesome. You have a real way with words. |
| Zaz9-zaa0 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseWow... The ending was amazing; mezmerizing and chockful of detailed theory, gore, meaning, riveting suspense, and set in perfect order to lead up to the redeeming choice of love, and the final piece of dialogue. Bravo, grand author. :) |
| ChristalSteele 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseExcellent story all of it is wonderful. I know you said Fin but i want more. An Epilogue would be awesome. Cheers on a job well done. |
| VulcanElf 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseFine work as always. I found the end particularly moving, if somewhat abrupt. Your handle on the characters of Vincent and Yuffie both always make for an absorbing read. I hope you intend to do more with them at some point. In the meantime, thank you for what you have already given us. |
| MysticSpiritus 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseA perfect ending to a wonderful story. Well done! Mystic |
| blo0p 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseThat was an awesome read. Read the whole thing in like half an hour. XD; It was really great, really. I loved the details, just made me feel like I was there. I always liked the Vincent x Yuffie pairing, I also love both of them as individual characters. So yeah, enjoyed it a lot. I loved the whole plot and yeah, good job! Keep writing. :D |
| MysticSpiritus 2008-06-11 ch 4, | abuseAh! This fic is so intense. It's written perfectly and I want more. I want an update. Kapeesh? Sorry, I just really like this fic. Mystic |
| Dante665 2008-06-07 ch 4, | abusemust... read... more! |
| Aya-TheBlackRosedPrince- 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abuseThis is really good. =D I'm really interested in why Vincent wanted to erase his memories, if thats what really happened o.o. Hope you update soon! |
| Reaching for Stars 2008-05-31 ch 4, | abuseWow. This is a really, really good fanfic. Way to go! |
| Anthiena 2008-05-30 ch 4, | abuse0.0 This fic is fairly freaky. Do continue!! |
| Zaz9-zaa0 2008-05-30 ch 4, | abuseHmm, I love how you brought up the monstrosity of a murderer that Vincent was, as the 'Cerberus' for Shinra, before his father's death. Course, your power over being able to write him as a person, and not just a character, makes his struggle with keeping the past in the past (rather than having it meld into the future) all the more in-depth and realistic. Though, I am curious to see how the exact process of Lucrecia ridding him of his past will go... |
| les yeux sans visage 2008-05-30 ch 4, | abuseThis makes sense. I like how you have explained what has happened to Vincent. Now the question is, does Yuffie go against Vincent's original wishes and get his meories back for him? Great chapter! |
| Valentine'sNinja 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuseAww, poor Vince. I get the feeling that they're about to have trouble and that his memory is far from returning. I love your writing and this chapter had my full attention. I can't wait for what's to come. Hope to see more Vince/Yuffie goodness in the next chapter! Joey |