Reviews for Equilibrium
GirlWaterShaman 11/1/08 . chapter 10
...HURRY UP! Don't make it a sad ending...;_;
Attila12 11/1/08 . chapter 10
No! T.T Cresselia! Palkia, Dialga and Arceus are all jerks in this story! They didn't care about the town OR Darkrai at all! I really hope she lives. I know that this is tragedy and all, but I still want her to live. I hope the next chapter comes soon...

Attila
GirlWaterShaman 11/1/08 . chapter 9
GASPETH! *goes to read the next chapter*
Divinehearts 11/1/08 . chapter 10
Gah, this story is so freaking awesome! I almost cried in this chapter, but I'm kind of confused. Is the only thing Dialga, Palkia, and Arceus wanted was to kill Darkrai and destroy Alamos. Wow, I didn't know they hated him THAT much.
SilverUmbra 11/1/08 . chapter 10
Could it be...?

-rubs eyes-

Not one update, but multiples? Score!

N-no! Not Cresselia! Don't tell me she's dead! D: I almost cried at this part! Awesome job as always, I love how descriptive you are. I'll be awaiting the next chapter :D
TheDragonLover 11/1/08 . chapter 9
NO! *cries* Cresselia, where ARE you? TT_TT I like how you made it darker, but NO! Not Darkrai dying! Don't make it THAT dark! *sob*

But, this is a lovely (but scary) chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Heehee, it might be a bit embarrassing, though, if Darkrai got saved by Cresselia, or if they both ended up getting saved by Alice. XP

Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),

DL ('Dragon Lover')
partner555 10/31/08 . chapter 8
I didn't know the other legendaries disliked Darkrai except Giratina. Nice chapter
TheDragonLover 10/30/08 . chapter 8
Wonderful chapter! I snuck on to check my mail, though, so I really gotta go! Bye!

blahblahblah, DL
Attila12 10/30/08 . chapter 8
Awesome use of angst. I liked chapter and I hope Darkrai enlightens her on why he thinks protecting the town is so important in a future one, as it will bring closer to both of us. I hope you're right and that the next chapter comes soon!

Attila
GirlWaterShaman 10/30/08 . chapter 8
Of course this realization would make her angry. XD
Attila12 10/27/08 . chapter 7
Wow. I loved the new chapter Neo! It's finally starting to get some real action and drama!

I hope Cresselia and Darkrai both come to their senses. I hope the next update is just as fast! :D

Attila
GirlWaterShaman 10/27/08 . chapter 7
*rubs hands together in glee*

A great, angsty chapter! I love it!
partner555 10/27/08 . chapter 7
I hope this won't hinder Darkrai's attempts, if any, to save the town
TheDragonLover 10/26/08 . chapter 7
I know, FF's been freaking out over those line breaks recently, huh? Really steamed MY broccoli, that's for sure! XP

Well, I am really amazed by this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next! 8D This is so interesting, I think I might implode! Just don't keep us waiting for too long, okay? Like, take less then a month. XP (I should take my own advice)

Lots of dragon-y love (and excitement!),

DL ('Dragon Lover')
Attila12 10/26/08 . chapter 6
It's okay Neo. Things happen to all of us.

I loved the chapter, but I hate Alberto. It I were Cressi, I'd be in jail for murder. I can't believe he did that! Okay, I can, but I hate his guts for it!

I hope Darkrai will be okay. And I hope Alberto falls in a hole and dies... painfully and slowly.

Attila
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