 DarkLillyOfTheNight96 2009-11-08 . chapter 11Wow...This is really good...*Can't keep face and eyes away from screen and falls into the computer* OPS! OWE!! ITAI! That hurt! Update soon!
PS: I really almost did that xD
~Lilly~ |
 Random Veiwer of Naruto Stuff 2009-02-16 . chapter 11 this is the same as in your over fanfictions update will you I want to read more of your awesome storys and write more naruto stuff |
 ItaSaku29 2009-01-26 . chapter 11This is really good! I love the plot and story line! Keep up the good work! |
 Zetsu's rose 2009-01-26 . chapter 11cool cant wait to see how their mission goes. |
 Blue Wallpaper 2009-01-25 . chapter 11Hm...usually I'm not really into the "Sakura joins the Akatsuki"-type story, but you're making this work, and that's good...
I like the idea of having Neji survive though too; I dunno, even though Naruto and Sasuke died, Neji has always been...I dunno. I think what I'm trying to say is if you had to have someone else survive, Neji is a good choice. I wonder though, now that Naruto and the Kyuubi are gone, what will happen to Akatsuki after they're done dealing with Orochimaru? And what of the other tailed beasts they stole?
Haha, I never thought of Akatsuki flunkies...that's actually a good/funny idea. Also, will you add more to Konan's personality? I know even in the manga we don't know much about her, but since you've expanded on all of the other members' characters, a little more of her would be fair.
Finally, I don't really want to spoil anything for you, since I don't know how far in the manga you are, but will you keep Tobi's character as it is or...?
Awesome job! Thanks for such a great story! And not that it's really impotant, but will this turn into a Saku/Neji story or a Saku/anyone story or no? |
 CherryBlossims226 2008-12-31 . chapter 10Hm... Not sure I like this, 'Kina' chick... Hn. Though, you may be proud to say, you got me to read a Akatsuki story with Neji as a main character! |
 Neko4 2008-11-26 . chapter 11wat going to happen next also i tried to get into ur myspace but u have it on private. u can add me to ur friends list by looking up my myspace which is |
 jackie-chan1230 2008-10-13 . chapter 11I like this story! I'll be looking forward to your next update! |
 chibivampirechan666 2008-09-14 . chapter 10yo
kl fic bt relli sad im friggin crying dammit coz everyone n konoha cept pinky n neji r dead n the snake **tard is still alive plz updaet n kill THE SNAKE **
xoxo |
 kakalover 2008-09-02 . chapter 10i luv the past that kina has...a lot of people cant really make up good ones...but i luv hers...its sad, and can still be effecting people.., anyway UPDATE SOON! |
 Beloved of the Darkness 2008-09-02 . chapter 10COmpletely brilliant ( can't spell absoloutly (?) ) I LOVE it. Please update soon! I can't wait! Its really intresting and keeps you on your toes. I honestly don't know what will happen next which means this is REALLY well written. It is also one of the best fanfics I've ever read ( which is ALOT, beleive me, though I haven't been a member for that long). Please continue writting fics like this, they are an inspiration. You also have a great imagination; I've never come accross this idea before. Go girl! I agree whole-heartedly with your plot to rule the world btw. Personally I think everything would be better if feamales were in charge. Once again, thankyou for such a good read, & please update soon! I can't wait! :-) K. |
 a thousand cranes 2008-08-27 . chapter 10HOpe sakura's not taking on too much. ^^ |
 Zetsu's rose 2008-08-27 . chapter 10wow cool story so far please keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter. |
 uchiha miyo 2008-08-27 . chapter 10this is awsome. cant wait for then next one |
 Whee . 2008-08-27 . chapter 10 Lol. I hope Kina is just a useless OC that doesn't get any romance with any of the Akatsuki ? |