| Reviews for Sensory Overload |
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unique.and.proud 12/29/08 . chapter 6Awesome! :D Very much enjoyed it. I think taste was my favourite, yours? |
vipercharmed 4/19/08 . chapter 6That was an overload allright, it was just HOT. |
lindainsweden 3/24/08 . chapter 6Hehe, I enjoyed it a lot! Brilliant, as usual. :) Linda x |
TVLadybug 3/17/08 . chapter 6Taste was a wonderful chapter - you used such great language - and I loved the line "she could almost taste the hunger in the air"! |
Psycho Maddy 3/17/08 . chapter 6Taste is our first source of 's why children are so happy!Another great story! About the last one,it was a good silent I swear I won't give anymore ideas!I just had to get it out of my mind...it doesn't sound right thinking about doors and heads while the professor is asking about the souls' existence and subjectivity's definition!I still don't have answers! You distract me...thank you for that! xx |
Mrs.Scott323 3/17/08 . chapter 6An what an amazing end it is! *grins* Great job V! |
Pidraya 3/17/08 . chapter 6*whistles* *looks innocent* *does perfect imitation of cheshire cat grin* *scarpers* thank you for writing this series erm ... can i commission another one? xx |
aserene 3/17/08 . chapter 6That was wonderful...*sigh* of course it was the end. alright i better think up a new idea for you because these little series have been amazing and i really really liked this one! Excellent work V! |
Psycho Maddy 3/16/08 . chapter 5The strongest memories are usually associated with my opinion, it's one of the most powerful senses we have. I'll be waiting for the next! xx |
Psycho Maddy 3/16/08 . chapter 4This chapter seems to me like a silent movie...don't know why. I was thinking about Gibbs relationships with of these days, Jenny might feel the consequences of his behaviour. What if she was standing close to the door?She wouldn't even know what had happened! |
Morgan72uk 3/16/08 . chapter 5Thought I'd leave you a quick review to say that a) its a brilliant idea and b) I love the way you are weaving the story and the senses together. I like how sensual each piece is - very appropriate. |
Mrs.Scott323 3/16/08 . chapter 5I could never hate your stories. It was wonderful! |
Pidraya 3/16/08 . chapter 5i really like the part about him feeling he can smell her desire that was a nice touch xx |
aserene 3/15/08 . chapter 5that was awesome! I really really loved it! Excellent work, loved the description! What perfume have do we think Jenny would wear? |
Mrs.Scott323 3/14/08 . chapter 4aww V, I love it! Even more than I loved the others :) |