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JhyarelleDrakon 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abusetag
Jamez 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou know, it's my personal opinion that Nabiki should've lived, even if bound to a wheel-chair. That way, she could've been the Oracle of the group; while Akane's fate can remain as is. Or, she could've also lived, but raised by someone whom she comes to believe is her mother. She could've even grown up to become something of the Huntress of this Batman universe; it doesn't really matter. Nabiki and Kasumi were always more of my favorites, and potential brides for young Saotome. But that's all my opinion and thoughts on the matter. This is your story and it will go as you want to happen. However, I believe Kasumi should at least become this world's equivlant of Batgirl I; aka Sandra Cain. Much like said female heroine, she could've had the 'gift' for martial arts, but her own desire to not hurt others keeps her from fulfilling her full potential. And Kimiko comes off to me more like a blend; of not just Alfred Pennyworth, like you've mentioned in your ending Author's Note; but also Shiva. Say she has martial talent up the wazu, and married Soun because he was the only to have ever beaten her. And that was by accident at best, but even luck is a key factor in martial arts. I'm guessing many a great warrior have fallen because a chance provided by fate was acted upon by the lesser fighter. But say Kimiko sees the same potential in both Ranma and Kasumi; more so in her own daughter due to genetics. However, even that is only by small margine due to both personalities. He's too focused on his 'mission' and Kasumi holds back due to hating the thought of hurting any living creature; too much that is. You've really thought out your story. However, this idea is not entirely new, and some of us have been thinking about more than others. However, for some of us, the talent for writing eludes us; or we just don't have the time to devote to writing such a story. Anyway, keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see what you'll post up next. Til the next chapter, later.
gen x 2008-03-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseNot bad.
Sean Malloy-1 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseNice job on the story, but DO NOT have Ukyo as Joker. Why did you kill-off Soun, Nabiki, and Akane?
They call me Bruce 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseGreat fanfic! I love Batman/Ranma crossovers done right. It's okay if youre not going to do it with Ranma cursed but try to impute as much of the craziness of Nerima as you an. Update this as soon as possible.
jbrome 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseA good start to this story so far. I go with kodachi as the Joker, she already knows how to use chemicals. Ryoga as Two-face.
beladonna1 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseYou have a good start on several stories, but they have one thing in common. Without the gender curse it is just not Ranma. It's bruce Wayne with a different name, or Inuyasha, or Mr. genaric Karate guy. The whole idea of Ranma is trying to make these different situations work in spite of the problems the curse brings. Part of what makes up Ranma's personalty is trying to be normal and a 'man' while finding ways around the curse. (It would make a heck of a secret idenity for Batman wouldn't it) Some writers don't know how to handel the curst so they just ignore it blowing it off. Oh well, your the writer not me. Good luck.
yelluhchicken 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abusehnn... why ranma?? you have to admit, ranma's character is no where near that of bruce wayne. It would however be more entertaining to see tatewaki kuno as batman. hehehe sasuke would be the ever faithful alfred. you would be able to get a lot more out of this set up rather than having ranma as the batman. of course this is only a suggestion.
Bobboky 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseno, use T. Kuno as joker, he is already insane... Shampoo as Catwoman, Ukyo or Kodachi as Ivy, the other as Huntress, maybe Mouse as the Penguin, Happy as that really strange guy with the Lazarus Pit not super familiar with Batman's bad guys anyways, looking forward to the next installment
Rydan fall 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseM, this could go any way. 1: Ranma as Badman. or... 2: Ranma as something like Badman, aka, almost the same thing happend to him. (meaning that on the other side of town, the residents of Bruce Wayne is placed/located) Watch the mayham, when two Dark Knights are trying to clear the town. :p
Miguel Dubón 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just had another character who could be one of the bad guys... ...Gosunkugi as The Scarecrow! How about that?! :D
Miguel Dubón 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, this is a very nice story you have going on! I like it very much and I hope you get to write a winner, so good luck! ;) You might want to get a beta-reader, though. I know you said that your grammar sucks but it shouldn't stop you from getting someone to help you with it. I'm saying this in order to help since this fic has a lot of potential in it. After all, if it's a fusion (it looks to me like it instead of a crossover like you said) of Ranma 1/2 and Batman it should be a great read and it'd help if there are no grammar mistakes in it. Or at least the less possible. Anyways, having Ukyo as The Joker? Nope, sorry. If you want to have someone to be The Joker in this story then have Tatewaki Kuno to be him. Or maybe The Gambling King! Kodachi could be Harley Quinn. Ukyo could be Zatanna and Kasumi could be Batwoman. If you include Ryoga, get him to be Robin, Shampoo could become Catwoman and Mousse could be Catman. Cologne should be Lady Shiva (except that she shouldn't be SO old) and Happosai could be Ra's Al Ghul. If Tatewaki Kuno isn't chosen as The Joker then have him as Harvey Dent, Gotham's D.A., who will later become Two-Face. Well, that's my cast. Hope you like it; if not, no problem. Just enjoy writing this story. :) Best of wishes! ;)
James Birdsong 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseAye sometimes bad grammer but story idea was good. Good start maybe.
AshK 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseGood start on this story so far! Sincerely, AshK

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