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| Anaeli 2008-04-01 ch 4, | abusehey! you always say complete and then ad a chappie! your playing with my feelings! jajajajaja! |
| XxCrash.And.BurnXx 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abusehaha, sorry the last line made me laugh for some reason o_O I like it, I guess it was one of those giggly moments for me, lol :) XxCrash.And.BurnXx |
| Extraho 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abuseooh thank you so much . for a moment i though you'd go ahead and shatter jackie's heart. if this isn't the last chapter, please make a happy ending... ~extraho. |
| laffertyluver23 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abuseAW!! I don't like Bobby being a jerk, even if he is leaving her, but as long as he's leaving her for Jack, he can act however he wants! Can't wait for the next update! |
| lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abusele dernier chapitre est à couper le souffle. J'ai de la sympathie pour cette femme. La pauvre. Son homme part... Mais je suis contente pour jack quand même ^^ tu es la reine de la fic ^^ |
| forgetMEalways 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abusefeel kinda bad for that girl...but am soo much happier that hes going to jack |
| CatherineWinner 2008-03-27 ch 3, | abuseomg...DAMN! you made it better by writing more then you hurt me again. why are you so good? |
| Anaeli 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abusehey! adorable! poor jackie! bobby suckS! |
| laffertyluver23 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abusewow, i thought Bobby was with another guy, but it makes sense that's he's with a girl. Very angsty, i love it! |
| XxCrash.And.BurnXx 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abuseAw, poor Jackie :( |
| lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abuseT_T mon coeur est cassé. |
| laffertyluver23 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abusei know it says complete, but you should continue. The story's simplicty makes it good, which is why you should add another chapter |
| XxCrash.And.BurnXx 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseAW! LOVEE! I like how there's no dialogue tags or description. It's simple writing that's understandable. :) Much love, Love. ♥ XxCrash.And.BurnXx |
| forgetMEalways 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseyes he's going to jack!you write like almost all the best four brothers fics so good job and keep at it! |
| CatherineWinner 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseoh...ouch that just insn't fair. i'm serious...please consider writing another part to this. Great as always!~ |