AWESOME its a little creepy, but it is perfectly rationaly and real.
For most fanfics Sasori is either a human or a puppet.
I like making Sasori a human and all sweet and stuff
Or you can make Sasori a puppet and all mean. You did this perfectly. Its the kind of thing that real Sasori would do if the anime what explained more about him.

I really loved reading this and I hope that you do continue it!(And yeah, Sasori is a freak, but he's a cute freak)

I really dislike the Sasori/Sakura pairing; I just don't see how they would ever end up together. But this one-shot really made me more open-minded to the possibilities. I like the way you wrote all of Sasori's twisted logic and ideas. He's kind of like Itachi actually (I'm quite an ItaSaku fan). Anyway, great job! Keep up the fabulous work!

P.S. I would love to see this continued! ;D

This is interesting and i would be interseted in it if you were to expand it. I can't wait for dawning to be finished so you could possibly work on this.
However take your time on dawning.

hehe I liked it. It was dark and amazing and we all just love sasori sama for it.

Wow! I think this is one of the best SasoSaku fics I've ever read! Awesome job!

o_o Oh man...You MUST update this! I really loved this chapter and would like to see what you have in store for further chapters.

This story was a little twisted, but I think completely compelling because it was so believable within canon. I loved it. :) I thought 'dawning' had died, and I'm super excited to hear that it's still going on. Hooray!

I hope you'll continue this, I liked it!

Interesting, though if you consider this to be a one-shot then you should mark it as 'complete' so that people don't hope for more when none may be forthcoming. At least if there's no hope one cannot be dissapointed!
I kind of like it as a one-shot, I don't really like a whole lot of those 'forced submission' stories, I find that they tend to piss me off more than entertain me, but as a one-shot this is one's pretty entertaining.

Haha, great story! Poor Sakura, though.

That was so good, you must make a sequel or at least continue this.

Gah, it's ridiculous how much I loved this fic. The Sakura/Sasori pairing is one that I always found rather interesting, if not a bit twisted. But thats what makes it fun, right?

You kept Sakura and Sasori wonderfully in character. With Sakura being a fighter and Sasori being that elegant creeper.

I hope you continue this one day, but I think that the ending was cryptic, powerful and just fitting. Not to mention its implications.

Anyway, thanks for the great fic!

please continue!

I've recently discovered a liking for this pairing but most stories aren't malevolent and IC... unlike yours... faved it!