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DkWolves 2008-07-24 ch 1,	abuseI hope you'll continue this, I liked it!
Goatis 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, though if you consider this to be a one-shot then you should mark it as 'complete' so that people don't hope for more when none may be forthcoming. At least if there's no hope one cannot be dissapointed! I kind of like it as a one-shot, I don't really like a whole lot of those 'forced submission' stories, I find that they tend to piss me off more than entertain me, but as a one-shot this is one's pretty entertaining.
-SMILING.ROSE 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHaha, great story! Poor Sakura, though.
mushi6618 2008-06-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was so good, you must make a sequel or at least continue this.
Mellow Penelo 2008-06-17 ch 1,	abuseGah, it's ridiculous how much I loved this fic. The Sakura/Sasori pairing is one that I always found rather interesting, if not a bit twisted. But thats what makes it fun, right? You kept Sakura and Sasori wonderfully in character. With Sakura being a fighter and Sasori being that elegant creeper. I hope you continue this one day, but I think that the ending was cryptic, powerful and just fitting. Not to mention its implications. Anyway, thanks for the great fic!
GhostXNinja 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseplease continue!
les-liaisons-dangereuses 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI've recently discovered a liking for this pairing but most stories aren't malevolent and IC... unlike yours... faved it!
Aer 2008-05-03 ch 1, anon.	abusePlease, please, please do someting with this. I don't usually ask things in my reviews but this is so good and has so much potential. Spelling, grammar, characterization are spot on. I saw one typo in the whole thing. It is a crack pairing but you make it work.
Wicked Child 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseWhether you leave this is a one shot or continue with it as an...exploratory exercise, I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. And so far as I know, you're the only person that has ever contemplated the fact that there just may be other versions of Sasori out there. I'm sure there are others but for me this happens to be the first fic that ever uses that idea and use it well. Therefore I thank you for doing so and I congratulate you on having used this idea, as I said, well. My only complaint is the rather abrupt ending. It could easily be that I'm not used to a (tentative) one shot ending such as this ending with a piece of dialogue but it works. I suppose that means it's not so much a complaint as a personal preference. I enjoy the fic regardless! Grammatically the only thing to point out is the use of "shutter" rather than "shudder", otherwise the entire fic is written well. You have Sakura in character, and I feel the same for Sasori. Apologies if the grammar bit was already pointed out, I haven't read the other reviews. Again, great job and I'm happy to see you writing again.
Nekory-Sama 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseWow, you really really pulled off Sasori's creepiness. God, he's a freak, a nice looking one, but a freak nonetheless. But poor Sakura, she's like a magnet for horrible situations. Will Sakura be rescued though? I couldn't imagine Naruto and Konoha not noticing for long. I do hope you can continue this though. Such a wonderful story premise. I'd hope the Akatsuki comes back into the picture though, and Sasuke even. There's a lot you can do with this in my opinion, and you've already got me hooked with one chapter. Please update soon. It will be greatly appreciated. This site needs more good SasoriXSakura fanfics!
Mala Valvah 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseThat sounds... that sounds... I just think you should continue writing!^_^ Take care and be safe!^-^
Sailor Tiamat 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseOh wow... This was really really cool. ;3 I love it!
Sinister Voices 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseOh, God ♥ Can I kiss you?
Ninja Shen 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseah, I just love this pairing! And such excellent storytelling! I wonder if he'll be able to break her!
KimiRen 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseOH. OH MY GOSH. YOU YOU JUST MADE MY DAY! so intriguing so stupendous. subarashisubarashisubarashisubarashisubarashisubarashisubarashi CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE♥!

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