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Reviews For: Undone in this Mad Season - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

rubensrubens
2008-05-03
ch 17,
abuseBeautiful ending...Beautiful story...You make my day!
PyroWhore
2008-04-28
ch 17,
abuseAbsolutely beautiful ending =)
Shimigirl
2008-04-27
ch 16,
abuseI absolutly loved this chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Ayshen
2008-04-18
ch 15,
abuseI love how you get into Logan's head...I like swimming around in there. And the gay before he touched Lulu again line...hilarious. Can't blame him.
Love Maxie thinking about him...it's like war in her head.
They are explosive together.
Shimigirl
2008-04-18
ch 15,
abuseGreat! I loved the end of this chapter! I can't wait for more!
Ayshen
2008-04-17
ch 14,
abuseGod you totally have these two pegged! The push/pull of their relationship. That whole "a little crazy but it's nice" vibe. Love it!
Di
2008-04-09
ch 14, anon.
abuseI really liked this chapter. The middle part where Maxie was 'grasping his shirt' I could picture that perfectly. Good job and update soon :)
onlyyoujarly
2008-04-09
ch 14,
abuseI just have to say I completely love this story! keep up the good work!
clowneygirl
2008-04-09
ch 14,
abuseToo cute. It's going to be interesting to see how long Logan holds out. lol
LBF
2008-04-09
ch 14,
abuseGreat story. There were so many ways the writers could have gone with Maxie and Logan. Opportunity wasted.
Shimigirl
2008-04-09
ch 14,
abuseAw such a cute chapter! I'm loving this story so please continue!
poeticgrace
2008-04-09
ch 14,
abuseTheir struggle toward each other has the makings of something epic. I love this line: Because saying You’re my home was just too sappy for him to let pass over his lips. That's so Logan to me. Is it sad that I love this character more in the fandom than I do on the actual show? It's not his fault, I suppose, it's our beloved writers. Anyhow, loved it as always.

Thanks for all my reviews! :)
kaibre
2008-04-04
ch 13,
abusegreat 2 chapters! I'm really glad you didn't leave us hanging! cannot wait to read more!
im2cool4love
2008-04-03
ch 13,
abuseOh please, they so love each other. LoMax has become my new obsession. Your story is probably one of my favs. Great job.
clowneygirl
2008-04-03
ch 13,
abuseWell that was a heck of a way to deflect his attention away from the whole Scott situation. lol And how freaking sweet that he would've said the baby was his. I loved these last two chapters.
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