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RainDateChick
2008-10-09 . chapter 16
HOLY CRAP! I haven't even finished reading this chapter yet but as soon as i read the name charlie i was so excited i almost peed! ..not really, but i was really excited. I've always said when i have kids i'm having a daughter named Charli (no e) Elizabeth! I just had to review right away!! awesome story so far btw.. i'm gonna go read the rest of it now!
yummydumplinggs
2008-07-16 . chapter 18
This makes me wanna scream at how utterly AMAZING I thought your story was! The epilogue completely brought me to tears. Tears of happiness because Hermione, Ron, Harry and Ginny--the four of them--are so amazing, and also tears of sadness because that was the end of a really really great story.
LILY R0SE
2008-06-22 . chapter 18
AW THAT WAS GREAT!

i luv how ron and hermione broke the weasley's record!! 8 kids, wow, that's a lot.

also i luved how hermione kept her promise to ginny and had the wine with her at the end. . . that was great!

this is exactly what i wanted to happen to the golden trio, growing old together!

it was an amazing fanfic, I LUVED IT!

- MioneandRon4ever
LILY R0SE
2008-06-22 . chapter 17
this is really good, i luv how you condenced the whole series into one chapeter, that was pretty cool.

i did however find one mistake. . . Narcissa is Scorpius' grandmother, not mother.
other than that everything was awsome!!
LILY R0SE
2008-06-22 . chapter 14
this is a really good fanfic. . . i luv reading it!

I also agree with u that Ron and Hermione should have a lot of kids.
LILY R0SE
2008-06-21 . chapter 2
that one was really good. . . it keeps getting better and better.
LILY R0SE
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
I really like it so far.
Girl of Light Writer
2008-06-06 . chapter 18
That was the picture perfect story. I love it and it was so genuinely perfect. I loved how everything went. I'll remember Lizzy. Though it's good that Hermione and Ron got all the kids they wanted, yeah them.
maddikinz940
2008-04-17 . chapter 18
Wow this was absolutley fantastic. I loved the way you ended it. Great job. Im sad it had to end but im really happy how it ended. Great JOb.
rvenden00
2008-04-16 . chapter 18
Someone recommended this story to me and I am glad that they did. This is one of the best multichapter stories that I have read in a while. While I only started reading about a week ago I am sorry to see it come to an end.

I liked that you went ahead several years and let us know how everyone is doing. And nice touch bringing back the wine from so long ago.
Robyn Hawkes
2008-04-15 . chapter 18
That was nice-gave me the warm fuzzies.
Obsessed with Potter
2008-04-15 . chapter 2
Absolutly beautiful
katlynnoelle
2008-04-13 . chapter 14
Honestly, I am overwhelmed with the amount of kids that are being produced.
TiffanyM
2008-04-12 . chapter 17
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MaNdErS20100
2008-04-12 . chapter 18
this story is so beautiful! i felt so sad for Ron and Hermione about losing their child. but this story is just brilliant! i love that you had them have more than two children, i always did picture them with more. great job and i hope you do write a prequel b/c like you said...there should be a lot of R/Hr DH stories! ^_^
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