Unless? Advantage? *grins evilly* *dramatic music playing in head* DUN DUN DUN

i really love this seirries!

ROFLMAO its so funny to invision the overgrown slimy greasy git bat of the dungeons drinking a love potion and hitting on hermione! o shes gonna be in tru-bole!

ROFLMHO! Excellently funny. :-D

I think you've made him too weak and her too cocky -- neither seems in character. His reaction to her prank doesn't seem quite right --he seems younger than he is. Having them fight and bicker and tussle for wills is a good idea, though. Thank you for writing.

I liked the Epilogue a lot!! Yeah, a little baby! That's exciting!! I'm with Hogwarts, Love is most certainly a wonderful thing! Thanks so much for sharing!
Snowtigress

TeeHee ^^ I can just imagine Snapes reaction to Hermione's christmas present :D A really cute ending ^^

That was a very interesting, and cool chapter that you have written today. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

you should do a dramione story...

loved it but cant you make the ending longer or show hoe snape reacts to baby snape plzz i dont want it to end

Thanks for the extra tidbit of tie-ups. It's nice to know everyone is happy and makin' babies. Lol.

Great story. I hope you end up deciding to post the epilogue...

OH! THIS IS SO CUTE AND GOOD! I really love it! I enjoyed reading this so much. I liked how you were able to keep Severus in character. I'm terrible at that. I hope that in your one-shot adventures, anohter HG/SS shows up!! :-)
Snowtigress

For further writing, you may be interested in this site: /sapienti_university_of_magic It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Olympia Collins, SUM student

Just a sec I'm having a moment here. -Dances around the room- Yay! Fluff! Kawaii! XD That was such a cute ending, you are amazing! And an Epilogue isn't necessary, but please post it anyway 'cause we will all love it! -goes back to dancing-

Great ending!

SARAH