cute cute cute!

aww so cute! very well written, i hope you write more! :)

Woow I loved your story ! Really, this scene should be in AoT, wthout a doubt ! It's so cute, I love the way you write.

Nice done ! =D

Ah, a fluffy goodness fic! I enjoyed it greatly, thank you for sharing it!

loved it so much

Of course Daniel would have to make the excuse that he was doing it to help a fellow teammate, but somewhere inside him he knows he's doing it because it's her!

Thanks for writing!
CindyLou

aw loved it! the perfect tag! :D

Nice. Cute without being overly mushy. I like it.

Cute. As. Hell. That's all I can say. I was sad there wasn't any DV in the movie too. Why would they do that to us? They didnt even have a moment, NOTHING...so sad. But this was cute! I wish it would have happened in the movie!

Very adorable, great job. Just one tiny thing bugged me: at the beginning, during your descriptions you used "because of" a lot. There's nothing wrong with using it once (though, personally, I'd prefer not even once) but using it as much as you did is slightly repetitive. Plus, it's such a bland way to explain things, y'know? Anyway, the fic itself was very cute, I'm always a huge fan of the classic (though, granted, cliche) "I'm cold", "I'll warm you up" scenes, so good job!
Thanks for writing!
-Briar

My first review all togethrt so consider yourself lucky. I realy loves this onshot and I really could see this happening between Daniel and Vala. I'm hoping we see something like this soon but I'm still holding out for us to see Sam and Jack together. I have to agree with you Ark of Truth was awesome I bought it the day it can out and I've watched it three times already. Can't wait for Continum I bet it will be great too.

aw! SQUE!! that just gave me tingles all over!! super cute!

loved it!!

that was an excellent piece of fluff!! :D

jenni

*squee* This is awesome! Perfectly in character and fitting for the movie. Brilliant!