Love.

Were you squealing with delight while you wrote the scene with Hikaru and Hikari? XD

And that last line makes me think double about how the story is moving along; is this what you intend?

Lovely.

I like this long chapter. It really keeps me occupied XD

This chapter goes up and down, I see. As if it's in it's own little tale

Cute.

whoa, man, whoa

that was fantastic...update soon plz

that was great

wah...!

why did kyoya have to be so mean to her...!

and hikari's just such a nice girl...

is hikari and hikaru gonna be together?

I like how hikaru came from the balcony...!

update soon!

Hi,

Oh the drama and secrets that Hikari has to go through! I had a feeling that Natasha was someone important. I had to admit that I cheered a little when Hikari slapped Kyouya but I have to admit that Kyouya is a calculating and sadist kind of guy but I think that was a bit OOC for him to push her so much. I think that he'd be a difficult person to keep in character anyway since his personality is a bit complicated and you're doing a good job so far. Please excuse my fangirl moment.

-cries happily as she squeezes her Hitachiin twins plushies-

KYA! That Hikaru is such a heartbreaker! He's so adorable! But wait...what's going to happen to Kaoru? I have to admit that having an OC for Hikaru is a good idea since I like Tamaki and Haruhi together even after so many people say it's cliche. I don't care! Wai! But I have to say that my heart belongs totally to the more caring type a.k.a Kaoru-kun!

Moment over. Thanks.

And you don't have to apologize about your mistakes! Everyone's gotta make them some time, ne? I've been guilty of posting something not so great when I was pumped up on excitement too. So, I'm glad that I can help just a little. Plus, everything looked good in this chapter. Keep up the good work!

Update soon, ne? I'll be waiting!

Mata-ne,

Sachi-chan

Cool story. Kyouya that wasn't very nice. You should learn when to stop. But you got what you deserved. Anyway I hope you update _

Hmm...this has some potential in it. Though there are some typos dotted about and your grammar is a little off. Which can be easily fixed if you find yourself a good beta-reader.

At least it's easier to find one now with this new Beta thingy that has just been put up. Do some browsing for a good one and maybe they'll be a good person to bounce some ideas off of as well.

Your OC seems to have some good qualities about her and you seem to have all of the Hosts' personalities in good conditions. Hope that you keep up the good work!

Sachi-chan

P.S. Brownie points for making up a type that I haven't heard of yet! Great job! I'm going to keep my eye on you! :)

this is really good, i hope you continue and im niit just saying that to make you feel good... yep, positive - cause i reaqlly mean it

hi!

i like the start of the story...

it sounds interesting!

update soon!

:]

Wow Kyoya that was pretty mean telling Hikari she was stickin her nose where it didn't belong! Where as you do it all the time!

*takes Sanzo's fan from Saiyuki and whacks Kyoya over the head*

Bad Kyoya! Show the smart woman some respect!

Anywho while I continue my onslaught of Kyoya abuse...you should think about updating! Its one of the best starting OHSHC stories I've read in a while.

P.S love the long chapter too _

Until next time! Ja!

I love it. Simply done in an elegant style. A few typos, but I don't really look at those since they are automatically corrected in my head.

The way the story twists is wonderful and I squeal with delight as I read the words of the story.

I read it as a story, and not as some ordinary 'fanfic' on this site. I touch base with it.

Wonderful piece. Can't wait until the next chapter; hope it comes out soon ;)