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| Erendhyl 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet! I liked that you gave Naruto an equal role; generally in SasukeXSakura stories he tends to have his role significantly diminished (I tend to do that myself). I loved how Team Seven acted towards each other, it was so nice. I really hope that it turns out like this in the actual series, because they deserve this kind of happy ending after all the suffering they go through. |
| Melody. 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like it. I would very much like if you turned this piece into a two-shot. I would very much enjoy reading more. Ok, bye. |
| les-liaisons-dangereuses 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI can't reconcile a remorseful worried Sasuke with manga Sasuke currently, but this is beautifully written as usual... |