great story!

I'd hate to get lost in the sewers. It's prolly trrifying & disgusting. *shudders* Glad they made it back okay.

Lenni

This was brilliant - fav tmnt story so far :)

I liked it very much! Very sweet.

I read the whole story, and I loved it! It's so cute and touching, especially the ending and the Donnie/Mikey brotherly moments.

sudduly the boys felt somthing brush agenst there arms they opened their eyes and found them selfs in bed with master splinter be side them master splinter saw them awake os he told them how he found them asleep and all banged up in a hole by the lyer and how he put them to bed and nused them back to health os the boys got up and hugedmaster splinter and then huged each other but for some reason they felt like that master splinter wasn't telling them the whole story mean while master splinter was puting a bandage around a badly cut leg.

THE END

did like i, it was sad, but oh so CUTE! yes, i said cute, not a common word from me, being a tomboy n all, but that was really sweet with donnie taking the lead 'n' all. if my tearducts weren't so stubborn, i'd cry. but all i can do is smile, and that story has a hidden meaning too, never stray too far from home and if you do, stay strong and protect the ones you love if you are in their company no matter what, keep on going and never give up, no matter what the cost. I think this story just taught me how to be stronger just by reading it, and don't worry, the guys aren't all sobby at all, Mike did have a couple of teas and gasps as i read it to them, but as usual, leo wasn't paying attnetion, just meditating, raphie was bored with the story and donnie wasn't as emotional, but quite into the story, interupting with theories of escape and stuff like that, too complicated for me to understand. heh, nice story! 10/10

I loved it!

Aw! I love it! You don't get many chibi stories like this.

They were lost, but then they were found...

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic *hugs chibi Donnie and Mikey*

Really cute story. We didn't see enough of Mikey and Don stories, but they make a great team and you write them well.

Ok, you have some mistakes, but I can't really complain. Maybe just be careful, you often write "same" when it should be "some".

Ether way, nice story. I put it in my C2.

Two days lost, and Splinter got them home in a half-hour? I'm guessing that they need to start a course in map-making!

:D:D:D

And the ending is JUST like the story... lesson learned, right?

Nicely done.

AW! *sniffle* It's so cute and sad and...and it makes me wanna cry! WAH! I love it so far. Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter but I suppose I really don't have a choice. *sigh* And here *hands flame* I collect these to roast marshmallows with my friends and the turtles! It's alot of fun, so I figured you should give it a shot!

I'll be waiting for the next installment!

aw, so cute, i love it, is the croc going to come back? i love this, please update soon.

Umm... I think you uploaded chapter one as chapter two.

please update soon, this was awesome, i really should update my grammer a bit, i seem to use the word awesome alot, so here's another shot, this was great, well written, sweet, cute, thrilling, enticing, and now thats that done, update soon please.

thankies,