Good story, but I wish it was longer. I thought your choice of first person was a good one. It helped me get into her character, which I guess is why I wish there was more...
that was very cute, and Link and Midna were portrayed very well. The paragraphs were rather long and a little difficult to get through, but it was worth it. ^_^
Alice 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this. It definitely describes Link's personality, in my opinion, and it's cute how dog-like he can be in his wolf form. And we get to see Midna's sweet side~ It's nice to see the friendship between them.
I loved this. It's a sweet and simple oneshot that keeps their personalities intact. Thank you for writing this~ :D