I am aware that it has only been a month since the last update, and I know other stories have had more time spaced between updates, but could you please update soon. I am just so eager to see what you have planned next.

Anyways, great chapter. At least now Mina's doubts have now been put to rest of Mal's feelings for her. Great job.

Sorry for the late update.

This story is brilliant, I love the trouble all the boys go through with their ladies! XD Romantic, sexy, with problems that are realistic considering what's going on, I can't wait for more!

I am so glad you updated. I really enjoy this story. I am glad that things are beginning to work out for Mina and Malachite and I am eager to read about how to solve the differences between the other couples. Please update as soon as you can and keep up the great work!

This story is so great, among the best SM fics... please don't go missing in action again. Please, please, please come back with a new chapter soon! Much love if you do.

I seriously love this story! It is one of the more complex sailor moon stories and that is good because it allows the characters to develop better. I do, however, implore you not to forget that the girls are also magically powerful, especially Serena. I was suprised that Serena didn't use some moon magic stuff to attack that girl after what she did to the armoire. Don't take that offensively it's just me and I did really love how she slapped the brat that obviously deserved it. I was super pleased with Mina and Malachite's relationship in this past chapter, very well done. I also love the way you don't focus too much on one pairing which allows the story to evolve every character better. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon. So you know, I am saving this story and I will check on it frequently for updates. It is a fantastic story and anyone who thinks otherwise wouldn't know creativity if it bit them in the arse.
Thank you for creating such a fantastic story and update soon,
Tsuki

Review...PLEASE...sometime soon...PLEASE!

This is great it truely is. I hope you update soon :)
I haven't read anything quite like it and I love the way you have fleshed out the characters of the generals.
Also, maybe you'd like to know, I think the character of Serenity fits perfectly, and I don't think less of her for being being a more passive, feminine character.

when are you going to review?1?!?!?!?!?! I seriously check it everyday hoping you will..and NOTHING...=( ...new chapters PLEASE!

You my dear are CRAZY GOOD! now i only say crazy good 2 people who i think are well CRAZY GOOD! this story is awesome and fabulous! Can't imagine where you got all these ideas! I am beggin u w/ everyone else 2 pleaz continue cauz I LOVE UR STORY! I have nothin 2 complain about! i give you a gazillion stars. very interested in ur work. u have great potential and talent. mina and kunzite are definetly my fav. couple which is kinda werid cauz im obsessed w/ mamo and usa. so again ur good. try 2 get more interestin w/ ames and zoi cauz shes not really interestin no offence. her parts r good though. i probably just dont like amy cauz she isnt on top of my fave list. idk. so anyway i was wonderin if u could heat up rei and jed a bit cauz i always thought they were passionate couple but hey u might surprise us!lita and neph r doin interestin and mamo and usa alright. im really interested wat else u have instore 4 us!

i like the story! more rei-jed pleaes.. ^_^ damn.. i thot i can still vote for the pairings..

to those who want to read the more mature parts. This story is still up at adultfanfiction (dot)net. Look up here username

here's the story link there. http(: // )anime(dot) adultfanfictio(dot)net/story. php?no=6043717

Oh wow, this is just amazing. Well written, great dialogue, right amount of action and description and fantastic character development. And omg, the relationship between Mina and Malachite...just yummy right from the very firt moment of interaction. You've suddenly given me a new face Sailor Moon pair ;) Would love to read the removed parts from chapters 8,9,10,11 and 12 if thats not too much trouble? . Read the whole 23 chapters in 3 hours straight and will definitly be keeping an eye on this lil ficlet. Keep up the good work!

I am so happy that you are back. I am looking forward to more

Cool you updated I just finished this chapter and cannot wait to read the rest, now I'm probably going to be stuck reading this until I reach the current chapter. Please send the naughtier dare I say wicked versions of Ch. 18 to Ch.22 to my wicked self at . I really like how you write Neph in this chapter and his relationship with his father in law is heartwarming and very father/son. I cannot wait to read how you develop more of Neph and Jupiter.

This is, probably to date, the best GeneralXScout story I've ever read. (Although I am not yet aware if the Princesses retain their Scout status...further reading, I'm sure, will clear it up.) Overall, it has been beautifully written, thought-out, and detailed in every aspect. You have a perfect blend of both dialogue and description going on here, so it was no wonder that you had me from the prologue. The story itself is incredibly original and, well, amazing. I dearly love it! Jorowyn is hilarious; he's probably my new favorite OMC. I was worried he wouldn't be very well developed like a lot of OCs can sometimes be, but you've given me a wonderful surprise! And he's not technically your original creation, am I right? I haven't read the other stories he's in, but if he's anything like he is in your story, then you've done an incredible interpretation. That can be hard to do for OCs, I imagine.
So, I pray that you'll continue to update this story. It's been a great read so far!
P.S. As soon as I read that Chaos wants the Dark Moon family of Nemesis on his side, I had to prevent myself from screaming out in joy, as my roommate would think that I'm insane. :) I always loved their story the best from the original anime, so I thought, "Holy crap! This already amazing story just became 12982931921297190 times more awesome!"