I set out reading this story with a tiny amount of hesitation (not sure why) but after the first chapter I was hooked and by the last I was wriggling in my chair, toes curled in delicious anticipation. I love it! Each character fairly bursts from the page and the resulting couples sizzle. I couldn't even tell you which couple I favoured because they are all equally brilliant. I love the uniqueness of each of the worlds, the different clothing, jewellery ect that sets each planet and culture apart. So vividly is your descriptions of these worlds that when you put your characters in them you have created something truely breathtaking and special. Very well written, I only noticed very minor spelling mistakes here and there but it did not detract from the class of your tale.

Much to my delight, it would seem that you have updated quite recently. I really hope that life doesn't get in the way too much and that new chapters will be out soon. I will be waiting with baited breath.

Oh, and I love Jorowyn too.

You should definately update soon! I love that the guys are for once stronger than the girls. It's a nice change. Continue please!

I am aware that it has only been a month since the last update, and I know other stories have had more time spaced between updates, but could you please update soon. I am just so eager to see what you have planned next.

Anyways, great chapter. At least now Mina's doubts have now been put to rest of Mal's feelings for her. Great job.

Sorry for the late update.

This story is brilliant, I love the trouble all the boys go through with their ladies! XD Romantic, sexy, with problems that are realistic considering what's going on, I can't wait for more!

I am so glad you updated. I really enjoy this story. I am glad that things are beginning to work out for Mina and Malachite and I am eager to read about how to solve the differences between the other couples. Please update as soon as you can and keep up the great work!

This story is so great, among the best SM fics... please don't go missing in action again. Please, please, please come back with a new chapter soon! Much love if you do.

I seriously love this story! It is one of the more complex sailor moon stories and that is good because it allows the characters to develop better. I do, however, implore you not to forget that the girls are also magically powerful, especially Serena. I was suprised that Serena didn't use some moon magic stuff to attack that girl after what she did to the armoire. Don't take that offensively it's just me and I did really love how she slapped the brat that obviously deserved it. I was super pleased with Mina and Malachite's relationship in this past chapter, very well done. I also love the way you don't focus too much on one pairing which allows the story to evolve every character better. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon. So you know, I am saving this story and I will check on it frequently for updates. It is a fantastic story and anyone who thinks otherwise wouldn't know creativity if it bit them in the arse.
Thank you for creating such a fantastic story and update soon,
Tsuki

Review...PLEASE...sometime soon...PLEASE!

This is great it truely is. I hope you update soon :)
I haven't read anything quite like it and I love the way you have fleshed out the characters of the generals.
Also, maybe you'd like to know, I think the character of Serenity fits perfectly, and I don't think less of her for being being a more passive, feminine character.

when are you going to review?1?!?!?!?!?! I seriously check it everyday hoping you will..and NOTHING...=( ...new chapters PLEASE!

You my dear are CRAZY GOOD! now i only say crazy good 2 people who i think are well CRAZY GOOD! this story is awesome and fabulous! Can't imagine where you got all these ideas! I am beggin u w/ everyone else 2 pleaz continue cauz I LOVE UR STORY! I have nothin 2 complain about! i give you a gazillion stars. very interested in ur work. u have great potential and talent. mina and kunzite are definetly my fav. couple which is kinda werid cauz im obsessed w/ mamo and usa. so again ur good. try 2 get more interestin w/ ames and zoi cauz shes not really interestin no offence. her parts r good though. i probably just dont like amy cauz she isnt on top of my fave list. idk. so anyway i was wonderin if u could heat up rei and jed a bit cauz i always thought they were passionate couple but hey u might surprise us!lita and neph r doin interestin and mamo and usa alright. im really interested wat else u have instore 4 us!

i like the story! more rei-jed pleaes.. ^_^ damn.. i thot i can still vote for the pairings..

to those who want to read the more mature parts. This story is still up at adultfanfiction (dot)net. Look up here username

here's the story link there. http(: // )anime(dot) adultfanfictio(dot)net/story. php?no=6043717

Oh wow, this is just amazing. Well written, great dialogue, right amount of action and description and fantastic character development. And omg, the relationship between Mina and Malachite...just yummy right from the very firt moment of interaction. You've suddenly given me a new face Sailor Moon pair ;) Would love to read the removed parts from chapters 8,9,10,11 and 12 if thats not too much trouble? . Read the whole 23 chapters in 3 hours straight and will definitly be keeping an eye on this lil ficlet. Keep up the good work!

I am so happy that you are back. I am looking forward to more