ASDFJKL:; that was great.

LOL nice twist at the end! very funny

I love this story! It's a good read for fans of Manjoume, valentineshipping, and Chosaku and Shoji bashing.

hahahaa! funny _

Thank you, I was ROFLOL after reading this. Very nice setup for the Manjoume's older brothers to make themselves look like even bigger idiots. I like the surprise that Asuka and Manjoume were married.

wow. that was special...LOVED IT!

At the risk of sounding incredibly naive, I'll sum my opinion of this up in three words: that was great.

So they finally tripped themselves up! That's what happens when you try to hard to get someone in trouble. One tends to overlook things and jump to conclusions.

Also, let me say that I applaud your efforts at variation of syntax and specific diction. I really enjoyed it. Not only did it flow well, but the plot itself was pretty flawless.

You really got into the issues that financial bigshots really have to deal with. Good observations concerning media and society. :P

Finally...really enjoyed the valentineshipping cameo.

You know I love this already. It was just perfect. Serves them right, too.