loved it!

I absolutely loved the story. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent. Keep up the good work, you are a great author. I will keep my eye open for your other works.

Wow ! That was a hell of a good story !! I just love the sarcams in there. Thanks so much for writting this. Really hope to read something from you again.

Great story and nice ending. I loved your first story and this one as much. I do hope you continue writing and will look for new stories from you.

i love your edward adn bella and I am glad they ended up together, for a while i didn't know if they would.

All I can say after finishing this, is it is absolute perfection. Thank you so much for writing this amazing story!

wow that was a really touching story :) i loved it

love it

your bella is an annoying fuckin waste of a person. she doesn't deserve anybody in her life. she always looks down on people and thinks she's better than everybody else. annoying bitch.

Gawd. Amazing story. Bella and Edward are not perfect at all, and Bella is indeed very OOC. But dammit, this was perfect. I loved the chapter with Bella, Edward and Karen - the way she fond out and Bella's decleration that she'll allways love him was epic. Thank you so much!!

This is such a sweet story! I love how it's about facing the problems as you grow up. It reminds me of a person that I know who would enjoy this story. =)

Great job!

ahh i wish you'd still continue the story.
i swear i love this story. i started reading "A rite.." yesterday morning, and i read it in just a day. i couldn't stop..and now i'm also done with this.
but don't worry, i understand why this has to end.
it really was a great story. and made me cry a little, but made me smile for the most part. thanks for writing it :)

Wow! I actually cannot believe how much I got sucked into that. It was great. You can really write well.

Such a great story (and I mean both of them). Your writing is beautiful! Thanks :-)

that was a good story i liked it