|Reviews for The way back|
| Ellinor 4/29/10 . chapter 21
I just loved, loved the story; the characters, the plot, the humour, the language... You truly know and own the words.
| Erin 4/13/10 . chapter 21
I love this story and the first one but the second was so much better i love that they were grown up now and how they should be togther. When edward came to her apartment after lunch with karen it was so so sweet and when he said he was heart boken too! The ending was perfect and i loved loved it a book of this would be so AMAZING!
| Judith 4/8/10 . chapter 21
WOW! Thank you for sharing this story, (RITE OF PASSAGE AND THE WAY BACK) on the internet so that priveleged readers like myself might have access to it. I refer to it as one story because to me, that's what it is. It is complete,whole, together. The story comes full circle. I wonder though, why you chose to submit it as a TWILIGHT FANFIC and not simply give the characters their own identities. The story deserves to be published in it' own right. Yes, there would need to be some additional character development, but I can't see that as much of an obstacle. Having read the TWILIGHT series, (multiple times), as well as the complete HARRY POTTER, I assert that this story is better! Of course, the mature subject matter and language might preclude it from mainstream acceptance, and definitely the young reader market. However, the work has merrit. It has a point of view and it speaks to the reader. If you do publish, I only hope that it is not thrown into the romance novel category. While I'm sure that they make plenty of money for their authors, again, this story is better than that classification. I have a 13 y/o niece and I am seriously considering allowing her to read it, I think she would benifit from it. I am sure I will read it again! Thank you and I look forward to reading your other works.
| twilightlover 4/5/10 . chapter 5
i think ive seen that movie but it was before i became obsessed with all things french umm maybe ill watch it again! They are so funny i wish I had an Edward
| twilightlover 4/5/10 . chapter 2
Ive already read the story once but is so good i keep coming back!
| Ashlie Christine 4/5/10 . chapter 21
Couldnt have asked for a better ending! Absolutly luved it! It was wonderfull! :)
| SparksZ 4/1/10 . chapter 21
I just read the 2 stories in 2 days... It's that good.
I LOVED the banter between your characters. I was laughing out loud all the time, which I never normally do. You are a master of wit.
The interactions between them were some of the best I've read in fic & I've read a lot.
I do so hope you continue to write stories because you have talent.
I would love a third installment, but as you say, there really isn't anywhere to go. So it's with great sadness I say goodbye to these characters, & thank you to you for writing them.
| AlyaBlack 3/31/10 . chapter 21
I don't really know if you will eveer read this. It's been a while since you posted enything but I came across your story just now and I loved it, I really did.
I am not an actual english speaker (or writter as I'm sure you can realize with these lines) and yet your story touched me deeply, all of them did. They went beyond the understanding issues and trust me there was a lot of them.
that's all I don't write but if I did I would like to know what the readers think about te story. This is me letting you know.
ps: you should try to come to Buenos Aires,Argentina. Sarcasm is our actual official lenguage, I have the feeling you would enjoy it. please excuse my mistakes, english is hard i sware.
| Kirbko 3/29/10 . chapter 9
Beautiful...over the past 2 years I have read your story a number of times. My favorite fanfic. Thank you:)
| livinamk 3/23/10 . chapter 21
Just finished this story and it was great! Had me tearing up in some parts and laughing in others. Def enjoyed witty and sarcastic E and B. Great job!
| whiplashes 3/9/10 . chapter 21
:) Oh the torture!
| smilton 2/27/10 . chapter 21
I love this story I have cried and laughed! You should really think about a sequel!
| jasam4ever19 2/18/10 . chapter 21
I truly loved this. I was very upset at the beginning that I was crying in the 1st chapter after the way the 1st story began. I wasn't really planning on reading anything with angst especially not this much angst and I really didn't have a lot of faith that you were going to be able to win me over at end, but I was hooked and determined to finish it to give you a chance and because I just had to know what was going to happen to them. So glad this was complete when I started because it would have been torture waiting for updates. This was absolutely incredible. I loved it especially then end and what Edward said was just beautiful. I loved that they worked through their issues and that Bella didn't let fear keep her from what she valued most, Edward, so she was able to tell him what she felt. Thank you for sharing.
I would advise better proofreading though because there are a lot of wrong words that wouldn't come up in spellcheck and it can make it difficult to read and get your true meaning.
| swimmer4 2/17/10 . chapter 21
I'm a little late in reading this, like almost 2 years but I only read completed stories plus I just found your profile. I loved the angst of Bella especially her over thinking everything. I could really identify with that. Your descriptions were super! I hope you write more in the same vain.. However, the use/misuse of the words in and on drove me crazy. I hope you correct this in future writings. I also liked your quiet but strong Edward who knew what he wanted and went after it, after he grew up. Please keep those of us like myself who really enjoyed your writing enough to review, informed as to where your new writings (if any) are posted. If you do write more get someone who is attuned to your creative thought that can quickly proof what you write before you post it. Great work! I would truly read more of your work.
| val87 2/11/10 . chapter 21
AMAZING story, once again! i wish you'd write more stories in the future, i'd bet you have a lot of ideas & your witty sarcasm in your writing would be just an icing on the cake... exc job! thanks for this story & i hope to read something else by you in the future!