Amazing! You capture Jazz very well; it's great that you work music into it. Poor Jazz was still tortured though...but Prowl was there to help save him! YAY! Awesome Awesome job!

'He could have been sitting in the very entranceway of the Decepticon base for all he knew, and again that dark corner of his mind could see and appreciate the irony of that thought.'<-This was the line that made this fic stand out the most to me. This was an intense, and chilling story, I'll have to look if you've made a follow-up.

Good job! (Poor Jazz)TT;

Wow. That was amazing. I can barely put it to words.

damn that was intense
and so very well written. I am impressed by how your wrote the inner workings of Jazz's mind throughout the entire ordeal.
and i can't imagine a better way to have ended the chapter (Prowl to the rescue)

wow.

that was... wonderfully chilling. I think you managed to keep Jazz very much in-character in a situation which many authors may have chosen to, ah, adapt him somewhat. Also, the torture scenes, while not particularly graphic as such, are written to express the same kind of despair as a more violent one (perhaps even more so because of this choice)- a skill I admire greatly.

I will be toddling along to read the sequel to this presently. See you there.

*shivers*

loved it!

Awesome piece. Thanks for sharing.

awesome!

I'm not sure how I missed this one but... gods. Absolutely amazing. Oh, Jazz, you poor bastard. Always been my favorite, still my favorite, and this is a brilliant reason for why Jazz has a visor instead of optics.

Man, I gotta say, this is one of the most interesting, emotional, and disturbing Transformers fanfics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Who would have guessed that the cheeful, happy, gentle soul that's Jazz had something so horrible happen to him in his past?
It was heartbreaking to read how Jazz slowly gave up hope that he would ever be rescued, and how he fell back onto music to keep him going. That quote you put at the beginning of the story about how they can't take music away from you was very apt.
I can't tell you how gratifying it was to read how Prowl was the one to rescue Jazz. I love their brotherly relationship and it was very satisfying to see where it might have all began.
I could go on and on about this fanfic, but, since I'll probably be here all day if I do that, I'll just say 'amazing!' and be done with it. Keep 'em coming!

beautiful and terrifying at the same time...a true masterpiece!

Oh, that's beautiful, it really is. And haunting. Jazz using music to resist torture - holding out so impossibly long - is fantastic, and I love, love that ending. *hugs Prowl for being awesome*

Poor Jazz. Who would have thought that a guy with such a good sense of humor would have something so dark and horrible in his past? His deterioration into hopelessness was done beautifully, and it was such a relief when he was finally rescued in the end. Amazing story.

Yeah, Prowl!

Good story!

Poor Jazz...

Yeah, Prowl!

This is such a great story. You should make a sequel. Its so well thoughtout and an overall amazing storyline.