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squall almasy27 2/23/12 . chapter 8
this is is made of awesome. there are some loopholes though...like how the heck norse myth became true for magic. and the (lack of) establishment in the belief of the gods (since is mythology).

but dang. this is made of awesome. appropriate pacing. i don't mind how the characters were different from the original. i love the world being painted here. feels like some kind of steam punk/magic. awesomesauce everywhere.
stellasnark 2/9/12 . chapter 8
I cannot tell you how much I loved this story. The world you've created was riveting, and I was truly worried for Draco and "Janie" in the Manor and on the streets. The sexy bits were ... well, sexy. The action was honest, and the emotional pieces were heart-wrenching. Well done, and thank you for sharing this story.
Aether41 1/7/12 . chapter 8
I lve this story, it's absolutely beautiful. You have talent, my friend(:
k 12/12/11 . chapter 8
Loved this. The emotions were poignant, the elements were very clear, and the plotline was very well-woven. I loved the description, and the tenderness was palpable! The end was especially nice-the sweetness and humor tempered the extreme darkness and intensity of the main story. Good lead-in, good job! I could go on about it some more, but Highly recommended!
ILoveReading96 12/6/11 . chapter 8
Entralling story! I like your style of writing very much and as a matter of fact, I was completely immersed in your story, which was something I did not expect to happen, having read one too many dramione stories which were more or less, the same. Anyway, you have great talent (I don't just say this to simply anyone) and keep it up!
C 12/1/11 . chapter 8
Wow this was amazingly intricate. Live this Draco and this new world!
acie913 10/4/11 . chapter 8
BLOODY BRILLIANT! This is so classic Gravidy, and honestly, there's no better compliment than that in the fandom world.

You must be an insane evil genius to be able to think up such stories and plots. Your creations ("stories" is such a poor description of your writing) are one of the absolute highlights of the dmhgficexchange.

Thank you for being such a wonder! You made my night!
AliBelly 10/3/11 . chapter 8
This is sooo amazing! So clever! I absolutely adore it :)

I almost didnt read it because I didn't really get into the first chapter, but I am so glad that I did :)
irianaceleste 9/12/11 . chapter 8
This is a very strange fan fiction. I enjoyed the I guess shadows? of Lucius, Bella, Remus, and Snape. It was ... I couldn't stop reading, but it was very berry weird!
black-emperor 8/17/11 . chapter 8
oh god, this was probably one of the BEST stories i've ever read. it's not too long so it's an easy read plus it's just so freaking interesting the way you incorporated other things into the mix.

this was just fantastic !
dormiensa 6/30/11 . chapter 8
awesome. stunning. i'm still reeling from this. and i can't believe i've never come across it! this is one of the most intriguing, well-structured, complex AU/post-hogwarts/voldemort wins world i have ever come across. the nazi overtones are frightening, though very cleverly used. bet JKR would be absolutely green to see how hers pales by comparison. brilliant!
Miss Hydrangea 5/4/11 . chapter 8
This fic was very well written. It was amazingly unique, and it felt like you tied up pretty much all the loose ends by the conclusion of the story. It felt like we didn't see very much of Snape in Hermione, though. I'd originally thought it was Narcissa, Bellatrix and Hermione all wrapped up in one person due to some sort of dark ritual.

Your characters were well-written. I was impressed by your OCs; they were more than just convenient characters-they were as real as any of the canon characters in your story.

The ending was surprising, but it felt right. I think it would be nice to have a companion story about the Marauders, but it wouldn't be necessary.
ILoveTea 2/11/11 . chapter 8
Wow, that's an epic. I like your humor too " make sure he doesn't hide his vegetables under the table and stick his hands in the mashed potatoes again". Great work!
Rayne Hunter 1/27/11 . chapter 8
I adored this story. It was just...beautiful in dark way.
Fury me 1/2/11 . chapter 8
I find it amazing, the way you spin these incredible, dare I say even epic tales from the smallest of prompts. The anagrams were a really nice touch.

Personally, despite what you say, I think there is enough wit in here :)

Can't believe you managed to fit it all within 8 chapters, and I can't believe the way it feels utterly complete anyway.

Thank you for sharing this story.
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