heeeeeey when are u going to update i just fell in love with the story and just can wait to read more

heeeeeey when are u going to update i just fell in love with the story and just can wait to read more

I love it :D it's funny and cute and serious at the same time XDDDD I can't wait for the nxt chapter hahahaha.

And I'm game with either a threesome or orochimaru and jiaryia fighting over naruto. But I think jariya should be with naruto XDDDD but hey, s'not my story.

Can't wait fir the next chapter! :DDD

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likey likey but I must enquire when you are going to udpate next because I wanna see what jiraiya will do to the sweet little naruto

threesome

I like the beginning. Are you planning to continue?

Oooo you should not make Orochimaru evil, but a sadistic bastard. You should make them fight for Naruto then it becomes a threesome! Well that's what I think. Lucks!

both should fight over Naruto then a threesome, that would be cool. This is a really good story so far... But you haven't updated yet... Please continue with this story!

You have a great first chapter here and I am sorry to see that it has been a long time since you've worked on it. I do hope that you get back to it and I would love to see where you go with it.

a hot young jiraiya out to get naruto... so cool.

The story is cool! I love it!

Don’t turn Orochimaru in an evil bastard please!

Well, it’s your decision. If Jiraiya and Orochimaru would fight for Naruto or a threesome. I‘d like whatever you do_

Jiraiya and Orochimaru should fight for Naruto in the beginning but agree to a threesome later on...

P.S.

Continue!

I definetly want you to make orochimaru and jiraiya fight for naruto and I think it would be best if you made orochimaru good but not too good.

Good, definetely good! XD It's a really interesting plot you've come up with here, I look forward to the update. Btw, I think Orochimaru should end up good because of Naruto, so until next update I guess.

/DSP

O.O Woah... COOLCOOLCOOLCOOLCOOLCOOL! w w w w w

I SOO can't wait for more! I was just thinking about finding one like this (where Naruto goes back in time and gets paired with Jaraiya or something) and I scroll down the page I was looking at - And lo and behold! There it was!

I love it! It's totally awesome! .

Please update soon!