this broke my heart. sasuke just seems so hopeless, suffering, as you said, a slow death. and naruto is unable to reach him even though he wants to. (maybe he doesn't want to enough?)

the ending, as usual, really brought it all together. "knowing their friendship had been fractured in some subtle but essential way" and sasuke looking after him.

everything just...gah.

wonderfully done.

thanks for sharing.

I'm probably going to bore you since I'll say the same things in my reviews, but you are just a really beautiful writer. You're totally capable of encaptulating a scene and making it vivid in the mind's eyes. I've enjoyed your work. Thank you.

Hmm that was interesting, and very original. Also very well-written, I could picture perfectly how Sasuke looked, with how you described him. Nice work! :D

I really love your style. It's awesome how you can just make a whole piece flow, no matter what it might be or where it might be going.

The end of it kind of left me dangling a bit. I didn't really understand how it was over. Were they friends? What? I'm kind of confused as to where it left off.

Other than that, it was all nicely done.

Mysterious. I very much like how it ended! Though it would be cool to find out what happened it is still a very nice story.