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| TamarackPines 2008-05-13 ch 6,  | abuseI know the drill...This is an EXCELLENT story...I've always been a sucker for this pair! Thank you! ^_^ I hope you update soon, cause this is too worthy to just gather dust! ^_~ Sin, TamarackPines |
| Musegaarid 2008-05-05 ch 5, | abuseHey, I'm really enjoying your story and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. You clearly did your research with that medical stuff and I'm always impressed by that. It's realistic and wonderful. One tiny nitpicky thing, though... 'You're' is a contraction of 'you are'. So whenever you write 'you're hands', you're actually saying, 'you are hands', which doesn't make any sense. The hands that belong to you would be 'your hands'. It's a little thing, I know, but it does tend to jolt me right out of the action. Anyway, fantastic! Can't wait for the next bit. |
| Kim 2008-04-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love this story! Please continue. |
| SoccerMexi 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseI absolutely adore your story and I really enjoy reading it. I hope you continue to do an outstanding job in like this in the future! |
| HMC 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseI love this story!! Hope to see more chapters soon! |
| dust-princess 2008-04-02 ch 3, | abuseI love the way you've used bits from the special features. this is a very well thought out story, and just generally a lovely read. Hope to see more soon. |
| Jadwin 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseNot enough post-NWA, pre-rebuild fics out there, if you ask me. Nicely done! (Are you on LJ? You should post this to SandfordPolice, if you are) |